AuthorsDen.com   Join | Login    
Where Authors and Readers come together!

SIGNED BOOKS    AUTHORS    BOOKS    SAMPLE CHAPTERS    AUDIOBOOKS    eBOOKS    STORIES    ARTICLES    POETRY    BLOGS    NEWS    VIDEOS    SUCCESS    TESTIMONIALS

Featured Authors:  Neenah Davis-Wilson, iRochelle Brandon, iShannon MacLeod, iLaura Cavanaugh, iMaria Rushing, iAnita Shaw, iAnn Marie Hannon, iLinda Frank, iTracey Morait, iChristina Neely, i

  Home > Poetry > Poetry        Popular: Books, Stories, Articles, Poetry        Authors: A B C D E F G H I J K L M N O P Q R S T U V W X Y Z     

John Herlihy

 Follow Me  

· Contact Me
· Books
· Articles
· Poetry
· News
· Stories
· Blog
· 3,141 Titles
· 14,339 Reviews
· Save to My Library
· Share with Friends!
·
Member Since: Mar, 2001

John Herlihy, click here to update your pages on AuthorsDen!


Books by
John Herlihy











See all Books
by John Herlihy



A Life of One's Own
by John Herlihy → (All Poetry by John Herlihy)
Wednesday, November 16, 2016    Rated "G" by the Author.
Share   Print  Save   Follow   Share on Facebook


Poem Artwork

A Life of One’s Own
By John Herlihy

I looked in casually from the other room;
But the child didn’t know I was watching there.
The little boy played alone with due diligence,
Going about his business with time to spare.
His friends called him Danny, a name I couldn’t bear;
To me he was always Daniel, my own teddy bear.

His voice seemed disembodied, a thing he didn’t own,
Speaking as if to someone, even if he was on his own.
To watch him you would think him self contained,
With nary a worry to bother him, the world just refrained.
At one point his pursed his lips, thinking like an old soul,
Wrapped up within him, waiting patiently to grow old.

The soldiers stood stately, unblemished and without sin;
Daniel sat cross-legged on the floor with a mischievous grin.
He touched the last standing figurine, his finger a magic wand,
A multitude of soldiers fell one by one until the last one down.
My son never looked my way, he only stared at what he had done;
With patience and deliberation, he stacked them again, having fun.

My heart felt like a violin string upon which a sorrow was played;
Everyone has a life of their own, in the life of our time fully displayed.

Want to review or comment on this poem?


Need a FREE Reader Membership?


 Reviews of "A Life of One's Own"
Reviewed by Jms Bell
Reviewed on November 20, 2016
THIS RINGS TRUE, JOHN, FOR THE 'WATCHER' AND THE 'WATCHED'. THAT MOMENT IN TIME..THAT GIFT OF BEING, TO BOTH...IS FLEETING BUT SO PRECIOUS! AND THIS IS A WONDERFUL KEEPER. THANKS SO MUCH FOR SHARING. LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FAITH...JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATION

Reviewed by Rebecca McKeehan
Reviewed on November 17, 2016
A rare and beautiful view of a precious moment in time. Excellent work!

Rebecca

Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen
Reviewed on November 17, 2016
nicely put, john... a life of one's one is a private & precious thing however it manifests.

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on November 17, 2016
I think every father, worth his salt observes his son in play. I sense something greater here. I sense that your son went off to war and you disagreed. But I'm often wrong in interpreting poem's hidden meaning.

Ron

Reviewed by Michael Schafer
Reviewed on November 17, 2016
Playing dominoes with soldiers, "everybody fall in". A very touching and beautiful poem, well described.

Reviewed on November 17, 2016
This is an extremely touching poem and so very thought provoking as well. The way you stand watching your son at play makes me think of how kind of a person you are. Oh, to be able to concentrate on what we have "done", as your son did instead of wasting all of that time concentrating on what we HAVE done in the past. Priceless!!

Love ya!

Jane

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
Reviewed on November 17, 2016
Yep . . . Reminds me of myself when about the age of the boy in the photo. I had my army men too, and battled the enemy, even those internal ones.


New Poetry by John Herlihy
Popular Poetry (Poetry)
  1.  Catching Happiness...
  2.  Finding Trust Again
  3.  Nightsky
  4.  Reality of Another Kind
  5.  Spindrift
  6.  Kindness
  7.  Our Restless Minds
  8.  Luxury of Solitude
  9.  In The Still of The Night
  10.  Dream Just a Dream
  11.  Life's Enormous Green Chest
  12.  Sediment Within the Soul
  13.  Roadkill Memoriam
  14.  Hunting for Truth
  15.  Whisper Pens
  16.  In Praise of Anonymity
  17.  I Have Spent My Entire Life
  18.  Shaved Reflections
  19.  Feeling Lonely
  20.  Serrated Smiles
Free Book Review Program
Select a book to read and review today!

Opening Acts - 2nd Edition by David Clure

Over 40 poems in this new edition of "Opening Acts". Get yours today...  
Member BookAds

Still Living on my Feet by Tichaona Chinyelu

Still Living on my Feet is the follow up to Tichaona Chinyelu’s first book, In the Whirlwind, which was rooted in a sense of hard-hitting revolutionary black love. However, in this sophomore effort, Tichaona brings the revolutionary essence from deep  
Member BookAds

Falling Off the Mountain (poems) by Kalikiano Kalei

A further collection of poems, many from years in the Middle East, but also the California San Francisco and Central Coast areas (Santa Cruz, Carmel, Big Sur, Berkeley, etc.).  
Member BookAds