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Precious Moment in Time
by John Herlihy → (All Poetry by John Herlihy)
Tuesday, October 31, 2017    Rated "G" by the Author.
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Many of you may remember that I spent three weeks at an Ayurveda Clinic in Kerala in South India. This poem commemorates an experience there. The picture, by the way, is not mine, but from internet.


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A Precious Moment in Time
By John Herlihy

She comes once a day
The Indian blood pressure nurse
A nurse’s coat covers her white sari
She greets me in shy English
Broken words from a full heart
Her smile betrays her truth
Her face betrays her innocence
She unpacks the equipment efficiently
Wraps it around my arm, an embrace
While the measuring takes place
She smiles down at the naughty child I am
“High pressure of an old man,” I murmur
“But your blood pressure is young,” she jokes.
And impishly adds: “You are superman.”
She sings a few bars from a sacred song
It’s about Lord Krishna on the battlefield.”
“The battlefield of life,” I venture to reply.
As her soft voice fades with her smile.
With the monsoon wind she is gone
Although the rains continue to roar
At the door, she turns and smiles
“See you again tomorrow,” she chirps
“I’ll be waiting for you,” I reply
“but only if you sing again of Lord Krishna.”
I sit alone now again in the room
But my mind is already thinking ahead
As I make myself ready for tomorrow
When Lord Krishna will again come riding
On the back of his white stead
Riding the crest of a sweet song
Sung by a simple Indian girl, my nurse.
 

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 Reviews of "Precious Moment in Time"
Reviewed on November 4, 2017
This is such a wonderful story about two wonderful people. 'Enjoyed this very much!

Love ya!

Jane

Reviewed by John Domino
Reviewed on November 1, 2017
An excellent memory, captured in a poem, well versed.
It just so happens, my wife is also a nurse.

I am a fortunate man to get such top-rate care, or so they say.
But she doesn't need another patent, so I tend to her needs every day.

Hey, who's complaining? If giving care makes one happy, it's the BEST way!

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on November 1, 2017
For a poem, the story of your daily encounter during monsoon at the clinic is quite stunning. There's so much longing and emotion wrapped up in it, and yet the clarity of expression reaches one to the heart.

Nurses can get you that way. I remember falling in love with nurse Mrs. Hall when she let her blonde hair down for Christmas as I turned 21. So unfortunate that she was married. Lucky guy.

Ron

Reviewed by Jms Bell
Reviewed on November 1, 2017
IT IS A WONDERFUL THING WHEN A PERSON BRINGS WITH THEIR PRESENCE THE PLEASANTNESS OF AN UPLIFTING THOUGHT, IT IS A PRECIOUS MOMENT IN TIME...WELL SPENT. THANKS FOR SHARING. LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FAITH...JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by Michael Schafer
Reviewed on November 1, 2017
It seems that nurses are the same everywhere.
They're the best part of medical care.
I know this to be true,
my mom was a nurse too.

Reviewed by Jansen Estrup
Reviewed on November 1, 2017
A light and wonderfilled touch ...

Reviewed by Mystic Rose
Reviewed on November 1, 2017
I love the little tender words and the simplicity of her heart and yours, much enjoyed your poem this morning . Have a blessed day John

Reviewed by Susanne Leist
Reviewed on October 31, 2017
You had an angel to watch over you.

Reviewed by Suzie Palmer
Reviewed on October 31, 2017
Oh how I would to go to an Ayurveda Clinic in Kerala!! How wonderful and near Ammachi's ashram!
Great Blessings all round _/|\_

Loved your poem, Dear John! Thank you xox :-)


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