THIS IS SO TRUE! METAPHORS ARE CERTAINLY A BURIED TREASURE, BT ESPECIALLY FOR A POET. WELL DONE, JOHN, THIS I'LL KEEP. THANKS FOR SHARING. LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FAITH...JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
the final two lines are the key to grasping this laconic piece's meanings, the main among which is that a word at the level of contemplating, though not uttered yet, is a true seed of your idea's implementation in practice, while a spoken word, even the wisest, is not the ultimate word so long as it is already dead becoming useless, i.e., beyond any measure. Why a dead cat's head is considered to be priceless? because no one would like to buy it. A great piece, John. Cheers, alex
A very interesting structure for your poem, and its insights. But sometimes you struggle to make the words match the form. For example, the last line… to my thinking, people put much more thought (wisdom?) Into what they write down, than into what they speak.
When I hold my antenna to the sky in search of poetic words, I rarely have the good fortune to tap into the kinds of thoughts you just penned. I am not suggesting that they came easy to you, only that I am privileged to have read them. Thanks for this treasure, JH.
This is a book of free verse poetry that addresses the seven main tests in life and offers some sensible solutions to passing those tests with minimal discomfort.
Love ya!
Jane
Ron