Nighttime holds shades of dark,
The silence holds echoes of hark.
The night whispers softly a hum,
That will drift like a fading drum.
The rhythms mimic my breath,
No hint yet of approaching death.
The bedsheets feel of satiny silk,
Her breath smells of fresh milk.
When I think I may cease to be,
I wonder who will remember me.
My head lay gently on the pillow,
My wife a lovely weeping willow.
There in bed her boney feet cold,
While I lay there just feeling old.
I knew if she ever will cease to be,
I would miss her, my almond tree.
He gazes boldly into her starred face,
The night offers with amazing grace.
Her mouth mumbles a tender curse,
She knows his silliness gets worse.
You are mythic creature of the hour,
Your breath gives me fairy power.
The blankets so soft on tender skin,
Their aging faces betray a young grin.
MARVELOUS! CERTAINLY A TRIBUTE TO THE TREASURES THAT POUR FORTH FROM THOSE THAT WERE WISE ENOUGH, IN-LOVE ENOUGH TO NEVER BREAK THE VOWS THAT HELD THEM TOGETHER. AMEN. THANKS FOR SHARING THIS KEEPER, JOHN. LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FAITH...JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
What growing old together must be like. So many memories and thoughts about what is to come during the time of sleeping or getting ready to. Beautifully done and enjoyed.
I think if you had stayed in the first person for that last stanza, instead of going to the third person, it might have been even better.
After many years of fighting with life and its ups and downs, nighttime together with their dog and cat snuggled in with them, a smile appears on their wrinkled faces knowing they had fought the good fight.
Oh, such a beautiful poem indeed! So many points of insight that I can't wait to say Encore! Encore again! A rare piece of the sentimental poetry. Cheers, alex
This book represents a thirty-day period of my poetry journal. Each poem addresses
the dominant thoughts occupying my mind during the early morning hours of a given
day.
Contraband Marriage, traveling along the hemline of loving after incarceration, is a love story written in lyric and free form, set in reality with a different ever after.
Rebecca
I think if you had stayed in the first person for that last stanza, instead of going to the third person, it might have been even better.
Ron
Your magnum opus to love.
Love ya!
Jane
Sandie :)