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Underlining Humility
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Tuesday, January 10, 2023    Rated "G" by the Author.
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-- An Underlining Humility –

John Herlihy

 

An underlining humility can be a source of pride,

A fundamental attitude of mind that travels wide.

Soft-spoken, gentle, confident, traits that work well,

More than any self-deprecating boasting ever to tell.

Echoes of false praises betray their limited scope,

While humility a mistress offering value to its hope.

Who wants to listen to false praises as very best,

The tedious voice of pride never put to the test.

We think self-praise to lend a sense of conviction,

But instead only lends a sour note of prediction.

False humility inflates pride with its sense of power,

A balloon soon to be broken in the crux of an hour.

Take pride in a fundamental humility to win the day,

Naked pride will always your true intentions betray.

 

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Copyright © John Herlihy

Tuesday 29 November 2022


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 Reviews of "Underlining Humility"
Reviewed by Jms Bell
Reviewed on February 28, 2023
WONDERFUL...AND SO TRUE! FOR, 'PRIDE..GOES BEFORE A FALL...'. ENJOYED. LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FAITH...HIS+INSPIRATIONS.

Reviewed by Mystic Rose
Reviewed on January 11, 2023
May our true intentions always be seen through the naked heart of good intent, lovely poem John, have a great day

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on January 10, 2023
Mindful of the beatitude, "And the meek shall inherit the Earth." There is something to be said quietly yet firmly standing our ground amid boastful claims that are nothing but hot air. Yet sometimes, one must have great courage, like Gandhi, to break through all of the noise and still be heard.

I recall a master's seminar I had at Stanford in psychology. Research has proven that in small groups, the one who talked the most and the loudest was usually selected as the leader. But unless that leader had a hard-working, quiet and humble right hand person to make good his/her claims, they were doomed to fail. Over and over in my life, I have seen loudmouths and boasters take the lead. If they were kind and ethical, I've supported them. Otherwise, I waited until they were gone.

Ron

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on January 10, 2023
What came to mind after reading this, John, is that a proud man can learn humility, but sadly many will end up being proud of it. Enjoyed this. An excellent insight that I will read to Michele. Peace.... r

Reviewed by Odin odin@aflx.com
Reviewed on January 10, 2023
A stark truism. Your piece reminds me of a couple of maxims: power reveres a soft voice; As to words, Baldridge suggests using her “velvet hammer” method, which is soft like velvet but packs a punch.

Your last line captures so much of the ailment of our world.

Reviewed by Diana Legun
Reviewed on January 10, 2023
This is chocked-full, John. Even the form is solid! So many concepts of human behavior on the exam table. My favorite lines are “A balloon soon to be broken in the crux of an hour.” and “Naked pride will always your true intentions betray.” ~~ djl


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