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Tell Me Something
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Monday, October 20, 2025    Rated "G" by the Author.
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-- Tell Me Something --

John Herlihy

 

Tell me something that I can believe,

Something to hold on to, anxiety to relieve.

Tell me something not a bold-faced lie,

Something so egregious I just want to cry.

Tell me something so I can feel your trust,

Not rambling of an ego saying what you must.

Tell me something to make me convinced,

And not just something your ego has evinced.

Tell me something that makes me want to comply,

And not just some medicine you want me to try.

Tell me something that will make me feel hope,

Not some stupid whim that makes you seem a dope.

What?  I didn’t hear you! You said absolutely nothing?

Why that’s the first thing I finally find worth something.

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(c) John Herlihy 6 May 2025


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 Reviews of "Tell Me Something"
Reviewed by Jms Bell
Reviewed on October 30, 2025
IT IS SURPRISING HOW MANY OF US CAN RELATE TO THE FACT THAT QUITE OFTEN, FOLLOWING A CONVERSATION, WE THINK BACK ON IT AND FIND WE CAME AWAY 'EMPTY'...AS THEY HAVE SAID ABSOLUTELY NOTHING! INDEED, MEANINGFUL, SINCERE COMMUNICATION MAKES A WORLD OF A DIFFERENCE. THANKS FOR SHARING, JOHN. LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FAITH...HIS+INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by Diana Legun
Reviewed on October 22, 2025
Clever, clever ending two lines to an engaging ‘Tell Me Something’. This one carries lots of energy, momentum and intrigue for anticipating the next line all the way to the ending two lines and those were jumping off the page for me. Even your illustration was compelling. My favorite are: “ Tell me something to make me convinced,
And not just something your ego has evinced.” Delicious and applicable one* ~~ djl

Reviewed by Odin odin@aflx.com
Reviewed on October 20, 2025
A treatise on power of persuasion, whether from spoken truth or uttered lies. Choice seems to be mandatory premise for this piece, and a reader is left with... well, "tell me something to make me convinced,

And not just something your ego has evinced." Even the best laid plans can sometimes fool us. Interesting cacundrum, eh?

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on October 20, 2025
I really like this one, especially the ending.

I think you were referring to the Almighty God who never says a word when fervent prayers are sent out to him, or the other guy, closer to home, but even more ridiculous.

Ron


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