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I saw him swim
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Sixteen year old woman-girl ready to take on the world sitting pretty down by the lake watching the crystal waters shimmer and shake startled by a splash near by just in time to see him agasp, I watch him swim Shark-like, is his form slicing the water, arm over arm gliding smoothly, strongly by his beauty captures my young eye muscles ripple and strain as he moves again and again dipping now and then across the cool lake, he glides unaware of the stirring he has derived Dangling my feet near the water's crest his sight causing a heaving of my breast Sweet sixteen, leaping at a whim I slide right in, anxiuos to join him my curiousity peaked as I watch him swim His body is strong and lean golden image, hard and masculine my hands ach to touch his skin I dare not expose my desires within I'll just smile in secret thoughts as I watch him swim.

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Reviewed by Barbara Terry

Reviewed on June 17, 2005

OMG Denise, if only I could have a love like that, even in my mind. I did once but not the Adonis you describe here. This is very romantic Denise, thnx for sharing. May the Lord Jesus bless you, and those whom you love, and be with you always, and at your side constantly. With much love in my heart, stubborn to a fault, joy to the world, peacfe on earth, & ((((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), your little terrified sister, Barbie

"If I have to be this girl in me, Then I may as well be."

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on June 14, 2005

Oh, this was excellent, beautifully expressed!

Reindeer

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on June 14, 2005

oo la la I can just feel the fire in your thoughts;-)
Sensual seductive poem Denise!

Eileen

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on June 12, 2005

You captured and shared the moment expertly through these verses, Denise. Thank you. Love and peace. Regis

Reviewed by Tyrone Banks (Reader)

Reviewed on June 12, 2005

So, that's what the "smile" is about...

Reviewed by Mary Quire

Reviewed on June 12, 2005

This is very good. The fine detail puts me right their, boy watching with you. Very nice.

M.Rose

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on June 12, 2005

ah, the mystery of youth's fasination and attraction ...
thanx for this wonderful poetic offering ...

Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers

Reviewed on June 12, 2005

At sixteen, we have lots of hidden desires..and we would be better off not letting them vanish as we age, but they usually do.
It was such an innocent age..
Grand memories here in these lines.
Enjoyed.

Lisa

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