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Dreams in midnight blue---Revised
by Denise Edwards → (All Poetry by Denise Edwards)
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Dreams in Midnight Blue 
 
In the cool, crisp evening of an autumn night
the gulls swoop high and screech as they take flight
I walk slowly, enjoying the quiet music
of the sea's welcoming whisper
calling to me, to lie upon it's cool, caressing waves
and ride away to any where, and nowhere
lonliness has wrapped itself around me
and holds me trapped, against my will
only his loving touch can set me free

As the  moist sea air has dampens
my soft skin and silky black hair
I hear a smooth deep voice,
whisper softly in my ear
"My love, look out to the midnight sea,
there is where you will find me"
I am not shocked by these mysterious events
for so long, I've come here, waiting
for this mysterious presence
of this blue eyed Merman who envades my sleep,
I long for the touch of his cool, firm fingers,
and that deep, musical voice
that cause my heart to race and leap

As my desires awaken and peak  longing is not in vain,
I stop and look out to sea
a tall, broad figure slowly arises
and walks purposely towards me

I' m breathless, as his strong armsenfold me in a warm embrace, and with a welcoming smile he showers kisses upon my face 
and once again, I am engulfed in a twilight fantasy
with my blue eyed lover from the sea

We sit near the sea,
he pulls me close, and we kiss
ever so passionately
We touch with such joy and surprise, and I see hunger and need in his deep blue eyes with heated urgency
our longing need is realized unitedly The silvery moon is a witness
our cries of joy and consumate fire
as we wet, and then quench our burning desire

While I am held in his strong embrace, I feel his heart
beat to the same rhythm as my own
but I sigh with sadness,
for the night is almost gone

Before the sun can warm
the dawning new day
my midnight lover will have to go away
for he is not a part of this reality
he is my perfect Merman
that only I am blessed to see

We stand and embrace,
then he kisses the salty tears from my face
'"Do not fear, my love,
our love is for eternity
for as long as the sea shall be,
you will always have me,
when the dolphins come out to play
in the blue midnight sea,
just look out beyond the horizon,
and there, you shall always find me".



 

 

 


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 Reviews of "Dreams in midnight blue---Revised"
Reviewed by Lois Christensen
Reviewed on August 23, 2008
I saw the ocean blue last week. it surrounded me with it's calm and it's freedom meant much to me. The seagulls I did feed and they squawked tremendously loud. Millions of them it seemed.

Reviewed on August 22, 2008
Such UTTER BEAUTY written in your lines "Dee" and your heart
is sweet!
Ahhhhh, I wish this "Merman" could be! In the heart is always strong!

WRITE-ON!
Warmest Blessings and Inner Peace, Warrior Purple Passion Soulful LOVe, SHEExooo

STay Positive!

Reviewed by Southern Comfort
Reviewed on August 20, 2008
So SIGH-WORTHY! This AWESOME Write has all the perfect elements to create a fantasy sublime! HUGS! SC

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
Reviewed on August 20, 2008
Absolutely mesmerizing, I loved this tale of the Merman and the beauty..Nicely done.
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"


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