Night has fallen down
to blanket the earth
in a cool showl of velvet
the whispers of night life
abuzz, in flight, scurrying about
scented vines of Honeysuckle
and sweet Jasmine send
a seductive signal to my brain
I wait, restless and feverish
for the promise of love's fulfillment
As I gaze into the rippling water
of the old well, I feel warm hands
slide slowly around my waist
I am pressed firmly against hardness
warm breath escapes my lips
when his mouth opens and touches
hotly against the side my neck
Up, up his fingers search and find
harden nipples beneath soft velvet
Buttons are opened and in the dark
water below, I see my soft warm flesh
exposed for his pleasure
my hand reaches back and grasp
his eager, hard shaft and squeeze
his deep moan draws wetness from me
In the water below me, I see fire dance in my eyes
as he slides my panties down and away
his hands direct my hips, like a maestro
to lean forward, spread and present
The moon's silvery glow cast upon
my firm smooth bottom as he presses
into me, joins with me in searing intimacy
the face in the well shines with a feverish glow
as desire takes hold and spreads its fire
while we quake in sensual rhthym
the face in the water is witness to hunger fed
to fires lit and moaning echoes of desire
as we shudder to an ecliptical release
As we kiss deeply and walk way
the shimmering face of the woman in the well
smiles in approval and slowly fades away
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Reviews of "The well of intimate wonder___Erotica"
Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on September 25, 2008
Hot Hot Hot..Love this ...well done sweet lady...Hugssssss
Very sensually stimulating and the only suggestion I would make if I may is that because of it's length it may be better done in a story format or broken down a little. Other than that...you go girl.
hugs
Fee
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hugs
Fee
You done it again Denise
Well done
Love & peace be with you
William