You've caught the 18th century rococo tone, Ruan. It's fun giving voice to a person in a painting.
The Irish poet Paul Durcan has a whole book full of these kind of poems, and they speak, that's for sure!
In my humble opinion, I think this is very good. I love the way in which you seem to weave your verses with such ease and such fine flow of rhyme and rhythm. Thank you for sharing this gift, Ruan. Love and best wishes,
Regis
Reviewed by Rafika Anderson (Reader)
Reviewed on September 10, 2011
Nicely done, Ruan. Your writing hearkens back to the sentiments and tone of Poe's sonnets. I enjoyed the colorful and capable storytelling quality of your work.
The songs and art in this book are about our collective emergence after the pandemic and trauma of the last few years - comprised of 5 collections: World as Refuge, Where We Live, In Our Hands, Rhythms of Change and What We See & Sow.
The Irish poet Paul Durcan has a whole book full of these kind of poems, and they speak, that's for sure!
Regis