AuthorsDen.com   Join | Login    
Where Authors and Readers come together!

SIGNED BOOKS    AUTHORS    BOOKS    SAMPLE CHAPTERS    AUDIOBOOKS    eBOOKS    STORIES    ARTICLES    POETRY    BLOGS    NEWS    VIDEOS    SUCCESS    TESTIMONIALS

Featured Authors:  Erin Kelly-Moen, iMargot Dillard, iPamela Ackerson, iJennifer Miller, iTracey Morait, iConnie Amarel, iMargaret Mullings, iSam Vaknin, iJames Harvey, iSergio Serrano, Ph.D., i

  Home > Inspirational > Poetry        Popular: Books, Stories, Articles, Poetry        Authors: A B C D E F G H I J K L M N O P Q R S T U V W X Y Z     

Mystic Rose

 Follow Me  

· Contact Me
· Poetry
· Stories
· 523 Titles
· 2,426 Reviews
· Save to My Library
· Share with Friends!
·
Member Since: Oct, 2011

Mystic Rose, click here to update your pages on AuthorsDen!



The Shine
by Mystic Rose → (All Poetry by Mystic Rose)
Tuesday, October 1, 2019    Rated "G" by the Author.
Share   Print  Save   Follow   Share on Facebook

A poem about writing before the break of dawn


Poem Artwork


In my nocturnal connection I live between two worlds
the one that is past and the one that has just begun
the sound of the crickets tells me I'm not quite awake
but the glare of the screen tells me, I'm not alseep

Forgoing the dream that was meant to be complete
I chose to knit the word before the break of dawn
not a sound do I hear cept' the sound of my fingers
as they meet the plastic keys of my computer screen

No happy thoughts come my way no sad ones either
though my pillow whispers alone I'm not discontent
for theres a beautiful lampost staring out my window
and it is eager to read what I am planning to soon seed

In my nocturnal visits I encounter the mainstay of wake
and only the crickets know where I am, for me thats OK
for soon the world will be abuzz with all kinds of action
and I will have to say goodbye, to the nights refraction. 

Want to review or comment on this poem?


Need a FREE Reader Membership?


 Reviews of "The Shine"
Reviewed by Jms Bell
Reviewed on October 13, 2019
FINE SHARING...JUST BEFORE THE RISE AND SHINE. I DON'T THINK THAT THERE IS ANYONE THAT CAN'T RELATE TO THIS, THANKS MYSTIC. LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FAITH...HIS+INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on October 5, 2019
Your time to muse and you get busy right away not to lose any of your thoughts. I find that time more likely to give me a short story that I have to elaborate later in the day when I write it from the memory of that brief dream with such strange beginnings and endings.

But you are writing about the process, not the actual spark. That probably is in your other poems.

Ron

Reviewed by John Domino
Reviewed on October 3, 2019
Another day, another poem in the making. This poem talks about LIFE. The LIFE of a poet! Thank you for this REALITY break! Amen

Reviewed by Susanne Leist
Reviewed on October 3, 2019
I love the dreamy feel of your poem. My special time is late at night before I go to sleep. That is when I do my best writing.

Reviewed by Dadfire
Reviewed on October 2, 2019
Vienna, great description of the feeling upon early morn waking up. That time is such a neutral intercession after a night's rest filled with nether world dreams and before outside influence as life perks up. It is a welcome little time of respite in our busy lives.
I have not written much lately on the den or communicated on it for various reasons, but hope to start doing so again soon.

Reviewed by Michael Schafer
Reviewed on October 1, 2019
I have to do my writing late at night. When day is done, and the house is quiet. Morning never works for me, All I can think of is the stuff I've got to do.

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on October 1, 2019
Much to be gleaned from this about the writer personally. Remaining content, no matter what the situation, is a discipline many do not have. Early morning is my favorite time of day as well. Love waking up while it's still dark and watching the sky slowly lighten to another days new creative challenges and mysteries. IMO, a piece with melancholy, hope, and strength of character in balance. Thanks for sharing. r


New Poetry by Mystic Rose
Popular Poetry (Inspirational)
  1.  Cowboy in Heaven
  2.  I'm Thankful
  3.  The Fragments of Hatred...
  4.  Dolly Parton
  5.  HELLO SEPTEMBER
  6.  YOUR...AIR
  7.  MY COAT
  8.  A Praying Wife
  9.  The Apple Orchard
  10.  My Name Is , I Am
  11.  The Rose
  12.  A Letter to Emily
  13.  Heaven’s Fishing Hole
  14.  War
  15.  The Heartfelt Gift
  16.  In Awe
  17.  Creator Of The Stars
  18.  What Are We...Really?
  19.  77 YEARS AGO, TODAY
  20.  My Glowing Fire Fly
Free Book Review Program
Select a book to read and review today!

Reflections and Treasured Wonders by Margaret Evans

From the Caribbean Sea to Machu Picchu in Peru, and from birds to flowers and butterflies, Reflections and Treasured Wonders offers a collection of images gathered from around the world.  
Member BookAds

Je Le Sens by Darryl Jenkins

Je Le Sens: Poemes Qui Inspirent  
Member BookAds

RE-DRAFTING in 2023-- Reedisms To Edu-lighten Your Cultural Mind Guide by Cynth'ya Reed

Note: Since my husband's cancer surgery 4/25/05, this book content has been integrated into the public speaking content for audiences interested in a sassy approach to personal and/or community awareness events. Another chapbook on intimate love poet  
Member BookAds