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One egg too many
by Louise Yvonne Goueffic → (All Poetry by Louise Yvonne Goueffic)
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When someone's feelings become a claim to truths

 As I was walking by you yesterday

I picked up one of your emotions by mistake

And put it in my basket.

When I got home and looked at it I found it strange indeed to find it in my space

For it would not fit into my lifestyle.

It was the emotion that opens its arms to faith

But it refused my invitation to consider my voice and adapt itself to me.

It put an ugly vice--grip on my heart

And clamps upon my strength,

It thrust nails into my brains

And sapped my vital energies,

And when it felt it had me it rushed me with your myths

To make me act like you,

Dogmatic and aggressive.   And specially chosen by your God

It forced me to be humble

With that cockiness that goes with possissing "the Answer"

For it had all the right answers in its three bullish hands.  

 

I'm sorry I picked up your emotion yesterday

So I'm returning it to you today.

It put me through a long long night of hell

I wish never to repeat.  

 

 

 


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 Reviews of "One egg too many"
Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on February 15, 2012
An interesting, and thought-provoking, cathartic construct. "Specifically chosen by your God" seems to pit the characters against each other, not only mentally, but spiritually as well. "It thrust nails into my brains" ... Brains? Plural? Are there two here besides the antagonist? The one being affected, and the one responding?

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on February 14, 2012
Wow! A lot of emotions expressed in this one. I have totally distanced myself from faith, hope, and prayer in favor of self-awareness and it is carried me, lo, these many years without having to rely on some myth to blame for my mistakes.

A deeply meaningful poem I'm so glad you posted.

Ron


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