Reads like a dream experience. Many of those come and go without letting us know, "from hence they come." That would make a great opening to a TV show in a deep baritone voice with much authority. Hair would stand up on the viewers' necks as a chill would remind them to try to be ready for what was coming. Coming. Coming. (Fade to black)
I LOVED THIS, IT'S ABSOLUTELY WONDERFUL! THE 'MYSTERY' OF THE SMOKE... GRABS THE READER AND NEVER LEAVES. WELL DONE, JANE, THANKS SO MUCH FOR SHARING. LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FAITH...HIS+INSPIRATIONS
The always illusive smoke is penned here as symbol of one of air's many disguises, but always, if we think about it, that which we can't live without... unless, of course, that's cigar or cigarette residue. That... wherever it comes from, is dispensable.
Oh, what mystery! It is beautifully described in your lovely poem, just like the haunting scent of perfume, or the scent of a bouquet of flowers. Thank you for sharing...
An interesting symbolic question, such is smoke that it raises questions like these. Your poem is quietly intuitive, knowing something and asking the reader to know. Very mysterious, Jane.
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Never Stop Writing!!
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there's also a spark.
It was the invisible man
with his cigar,
blowing smoke rings in the dark.
Damned if I know, sha.
Ingeborg