Good grief, I'm gasping here! That is one hilarious line, in a marvelously fun piece, Eddie M!
You've summed it up with infectious phrases and very smart humor. Oh, and don't think I missed the rhyme in that final verse... "cooties" and "booties"... clever poet that you are. (smile) katy xox
lol..lol...I'm a mom! I have discovered that little boys become bigger boys with bigger toys and bigger egos! Love your poem! It reminded me of my son when he was about 12 or 13. He told me he could no longer bathe with Camay soap (advertised as "the soap of beautiful women") because he was a man, and that soap may prevent his beard from growing! hahaha Love, Leah p.s. thanks for the memory!
Reviewed by Richard Christopher Suarez (Reader)
Reviewed on August 19, 2005
Excellent Reminder of the Peanut Turns into a Cucumber.
But just wait ....it transforms again....lol.
peace',
Rich Criso Suarez
Oh I have a boy in "that" stage....and Nichol became so "adult" within a few weeks...he even out grown all his clothes..and even mom a shorty now against him!!
Oh and he is so pround to be taller than me...little bugger!!
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Good grief, I'm gasping here! That is one hilarious line, in a marvelously fun piece, Eddie M!
You've summed it up with infectious phrases and very smart humor. Oh, and don't think I missed the rhyme in that final verse... "cooties" and "booties"... clever poet that you are. (smile) katy xox
Excellent Reminder of the Peanut Turns into a Cucumber.
But just wait ....it transforms again....lol.
peace',
Rich Criso Suarez
Oh and he is so pround to be taller than me...little bugger!!
Love Tinka
nice write. brought back memories.
TX