Irked (poem) by Ed Matlack on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on December 6, 2007

Irked or jerked, the future is full of permanent pain. Diddle while you can. Where the hell are you going?

Ron

Reviewed on November 29, 2007

Getting older bites, but the alternative - well, it stinks! I think this getting older stuff looks better when I was younger, much younger. Never thought I'd get this old, this quickly. Bummer ....

Smile. God bless you. Kathy

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart

Reviewed on November 29, 2007

Ah Ed, why so sad, did Rufuz hike his leg on yours?

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on November 29, 2007

Interesting ....much more in this one than what meets the eye!!

sTAY possitive!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Tom poesyco.th@gmail.com

Reviewed on November 29, 2007

Dear Mr. Lack of Mat... FOREVER NEW ???

FUTURE? IDEA? TOMORROW?

A HIGH, OLD REPROBATE -
WHO LIKES TO MASTURBATE?

AN OLD CUCKOO -
WHO LIKES TO SCREW?

A JERSEY DEVIL -
WHOSE MIND IS NOT LEVEL?

FOREVER NEW?
TRUE BLUE (BLEW)?
FEW KNEW!
WHEW!

:) :) :) TK

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on November 29, 2007

Reprobate shmeprobate, be yourself, and if the pain gets bothersom come over and we will empty that cooler full of Coors and use the "weed"whacker!!!!!!!
Georg

Reviewed by Walt Hardester

Reviewed on November 29, 2007

I am just to most old and reprobated.

Tell 'em it's your hook and you'll bait it however you want.

Walt

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on November 29, 2007

This sounds like a speech a Knight would give. Present this to King Scott, get your knighthood, and become that warrior inside your soul - The Naked Knight of Kentucky!

Reviewed by Axilea MU

Reviewed on November 28, 2007

Interesting structure... your sentences are very creatively thought out.

Your reflections are interesting because to me, they are a sign of humanity, which is also made of questioning and pain. Hopefully, not all the time.

Greetings,

Axilea

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on November 28, 2007

Ed, you should try to live with your pain; I know it's hard, but it can be done if you have the right attitude. I try not to give in; I have too much living to do! Yes, I may be disabled, but I love life! Hang in there; I will keep you in my prayers!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your Texas friend (who understands and knows what it's like), Karen Lynn. :(

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter

Reviewed on November 28, 2007

NO!! Not you Ed! I can't take you being sad. You're the person who always brings me up with your wit. I'm sending Rufuz over to lick your face and make you feel better.
Keep warm.
Love,
Susan

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on November 28, 2007

Poor Ed, feeling your age...everything falling apart, eh? Hear you. Got a back I need replaced, along with hips, knees, shoulders, neck...if we were horses, they'd shoot us! LOL Smile and have one for me, 'k?

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Kimmy Van Kooten

Reviewed on November 28, 2007

I am just to most old and reprobated

Thats it! You actually mouthed your own answer to all your problems...So, under the circumstances I say smoke a bowl with a few Eds, and let the future play mind games with you in your dreams!
Happy trails, ya ole' fart! LOL!
Love and Peace~
Kimmy~

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

Reviewed on November 28, 2007

When you put the bad in your system and then
put the good it's hard for anything to work right.
Go0d luck with the pain me friend..
Ron