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Denied...
by Ed Matlack → (All Poetry by Ed Matlack)
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...I hope this makes some semblance of sense...e

...To write is to help the self...

A loan request, denied

Of the denial, disappointed

Internally, depressed

Everything today I do touch

Comes negativity & disgust…L

 

I tend to get quite quiet

When upset I do inside feel

I still have a place to live

Rufuz by my side and

Rene with me as well

Trying not to read me that act of riot…

© e L 5/2008


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 Reviews of "Denied..."
Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on May 18, 2008
It's hard to take, especially when undeserved. Glad that you could write about it -- takes the edge off. All we can do is dust ourselves off, get up, and try again.

Good luck in the future...

Ron

Reviewed on May 15, 2008
Tell me about it - the rich get richer, the poor get screwed. :(

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :(

Reviewed on May 15, 2008
How much you need Ed, I'll write you a check, better than that, I'll take that nice mobile home you got

Reviewed by Lois Christensen
Reviewed on May 15, 2008
Denial isn't nice at all, and looked for things to get are denied often. You have Rufuz which is more than I have and a wife which is still more than I have. I lost both within a year of each other. Be happy with what you got, maybe you do not need the loan right now after all. You have many friends on the den too who sympathize with you on this matter.

Reviewed on May 14, 2008
Bad days, those 13ths...or didn't you notice! Help for a day or two, you might check under the cushions. As Richard says, happens...but words don't make it any easier...
Blessings and Faith, friend...better days ahead ~~ Micke

Reviewed by Bonnie May
Reviewed on May 14, 2008
Who could deny you? They must be nut! Rufuz, Rene and you will be fine as long as you keep writing winners. Love this, Love, Bonnie

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on May 14, 2008
Been there and done that. It happens to us all bubba balinski. Doesn't make it any easier though. Bloody raw ribs for Rufus if you can handle the day after farts. Stand strong!
Richard

Reviewed by Rose Rideout
Reviewed on May 14, 2008
Sounds to me Ed that you have the main things in life by your side, A faithful dog and a loving wife, a lucky man you are. However I hate it when they send you a letter saying you have been approved for XXXXX and when you go for it they say you are denied, whats with this. Things will get brighter.

Newfie Hugs, Rose

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on May 14, 2008
I still have a place to live
Rufuz by my side and
Rene with me as well

Be Happy, Bro, many have far less.


Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on May 14, 2008
That's the least of you problems, your posting and everyone else aren't coming through, so I needed to go looking for you which ain't an easy thing in your side of the woods.
Have a million dollar in your account and you will see a trillion of loan offers you couldn't possible say no to.

Georg

Reviewed by Barbara Terry
Reviewed on May 13, 2008
I keep getting the riot act every day, but that will soon be over. This is a very deep poem reaching deep inside the soul to touch your feelings, Ed. But one thing we will never be, and that is alone, especially when the Lord is there with us, as well as our life companions whoever and whatever they may be. Thank you for sharing Ed, and you get a 10 for the subject matter.

Love & hugs,
Barbara


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