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Mine Fields
by George J. Carroll → (All Poetry by George J. Carroll)
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As a demolition sergeant

We were called on to lay mine fields.

But never laid one in ww2.

Too busy removing the enemies.

 

This was a very stressful job,

As one false move and it was your last.

If you found a mine field

The simplest way was to blow it up.

 

Conditions dictated what course

Of action you had to take.

Just removing a mine seems simple,

But the enemy always had mines attached.

 

In other words one mine might have

Several, under or beside it.

Some times yards away in a ditch,

Where some would take cover.

 

When the mine was moved,

Those in the ditch blew up.

This only worked once,

But it had a deadly effect.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 


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 Reviews of "Mine Fields"
Reviewed on November 27, 2012
A booby trap quite in similarity
But through this poem which you have
written holds a deeper meaning...
One you are trying to convey which I understand...
Mankind can leave many a mine field laid before us
not in the actual parcel itself, but the "mind" field is much
stronger and able to trick quite sufficiently so all must be
careful when handling the "mind" of others....
being able to look for deeper meaning beyond which is presented...

Well done George :)

Love and Light
Lily

Reviewed by Vivian Dawson
Reviewed on November 25, 2012
Brave men face and do
dangerous things ..

Lady Vivian

Reviewed by Budd Nelson
Reviewed on November 25, 2012
those ways that man will use to kill man are infinate, too bad he never applied himself so diligently to other pursuits
budd

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
Reviewed on November 25, 2012
Yup. Once was enough I imagine for some. The things men do to kill each other.

Reviewed on November 25, 2012
Now that's terribly scary! You're lucky to be here! The thought of you removing enemies (bodies?) had to be awful! Oh, my! God bless you!

Love ya!

Jane


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