I don't agree with Linda, this are the words of a wise man that will never be old.
After saying that, the poem is a reminder of how the world is shapping up and what it will be like if we are so damn permissive.
Well done.
Georg
it takes a wise and mature man to be responsible for his actions ... wish there were more around ... their "rough" nature is actually comforting ...
a solid poem, William ...
Hmmm... every word weighted and balanced here, Bill, and the effect is very sobering and thought-provoking in a very good way. Indeed, safe boundaries pushed to our limits of responsibility and rights is good for both growth and control. Has the double-effect, like swaddling babies, of making all secure. I like the sparseness of this and taut strength. TY Kate xx
'Better Without You'is a compelling narrative that explores the complexities of an affair, hidden secrets, and abuse. It also highlights a daughter's heartfelt journey as she cares for her mother who is battling dementia.
M
Love,
Susan
After saying that, the poem is a reminder of how the world is shapping up and what it will be like if we are so damn permissive.
Well done.
Georg
a solid poem, William ...
Blessings & Peace,
Linda Wells
Blessings,
Joyce Bowling