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Feelings Of A Soldier Poet
by Walter LaVerne Jones → (All Poetry by Walter LaVerne Jones)
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Memorial Day






Author Note: Each person carries a burden for life and moments in it. Strongest for me come from Vietnam, my conflict, these words are fictional, but represent my heart. Walt








The path was littered with little flags
and the mind was lost in the voices
I could hear them brag
best at cards and ladies and the drink
it knew no end but here lay all those old friends.
From a far a way place
in the shadows of time
these were the voices of men
cut down in their prime.
I walk and think of the times we spent
chancing dreams that were never spent.
Bobby, John and me we were the pride
of our family standing strong in coats of honor
and faith we believed in you.
Pulled a pint from my pocket and I drank
a toast to the boys strong and brave
and to all the ghosts lying thirsty in their graves
no one will ever say
that we of the neighborhood ever walked away
from fight
flag draped and placed in the ground
hear the sound of taps being played
and angry voices stayed long after death
I believe it was a test
I live today but in the pathway to the soul
a bit of guilt with me goes
I am a live
I did not die
I cannot cry
I just drink now on some days
then I pray
for Bobby whose sister I still love
and for John
who I know is looking down from above
and walk away
from the others
whose voices I still hear
proud and brave everyone
a star for every lost son
watch them flicker in the field
among the monuments to man
Markers in the son so tall they stand


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Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers
Reviewed on May 28, 2005
I guess since I can't think of anything magnificent to say, I'm going to simply say...
Breathtaking. It's hard for one to shut me up..but you've done it.
Stunning write. Bless you.

Lisa

Reviewed on May 27, 2005
Walter,

Fiction or not, it packs a powerful punch to the heart--thank you, Sir, for remembering how it may have been...and probably was, to many soldiers. As a veteran, I salute you, too.

((((HUGS)))) and love, Karla. :)

Reviewed by Nordette Adams
Reviewed on May 27, 2005
Fictional but potent nonetheless, Walter. Thank you.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on May 27, 2005
Wonderful poetry!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed on May 27, 2005
powerful and poignant poem, walter; god bless you, and thank you for your service!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in tx., karen lynn. :( >tears <

Reviewed on May 27, 2005
'a star for every lost son
watch them flicker in the field
among the monuments to man
Markers in the son so tall they stand'

Memorable words and choked felt emotions to those of us who feel for you and others who have served us. Thank you for sharing this blessing with us, for we all can relate to your horror-felt guilt and are in some way touched by your courage. Keep writing. It can sooth your innermost turmoils when you are forced to remember on Memorial Day.
Thanks so much
Antoinette

Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader)
Reviewed on May 27, 2005
A really good piece of poignant poetry Walter.

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on May 27, 2005
I drank a toast to the boys strong and brave

A very powerful heartfelt piece, Walter - and we should all drink a toast to them.

Reviewed by Joyce Hale
Reviewed on May 27, 2005
Walter Jones, a deep mournful voice from one who has been there, grieving for those who have been there and did not come back. Powerful!

Peace.

Reviewed on May 27, 2005
Oh, this just brought tears to my eyes, a very strong and excellent tribute,

Reindeer

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on May 27, 2005
Misty-eyed words that struck me very, very hard. When a soldier speaks, I listen. I may not understand everything that he says, but how could I? I have never stood with him. Thank you Walter LaVern Jones from the bottom of my heart.


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