Until the door opened wide, showing me with silly pride.
I thought I'd seen the last of your hide.
Left you at the bus stop,
It has been more than a year ago
You taught me how to feel,
I was glad that you had gone.
Your lips of fire on mine belongs in a song...
God it’s been such a long time, so easy for you to bend my mind.
Time was when I knew your name.
Love burning hot in a different time frame.
Passion held control of my every thought.
How can this be so overwhelming again?
Your arms are likened to a vise.
They caress as they entice never letting go.
Hours spent in your embrace time has been erased.
You said these were my lessons learned.
I cannot believe how easily you let me melt
As if you never really left me this shell.
At a touch of your hand…I am mister putty man.
No control…again I am a part of you.
Sharing all your thoughts
A part of you I wish I had forgot
Still you own every bit of my heart…
I could only belong… to you.
One kiss leads me on to another world.
I hold on to the dream as passion unfurls.
Lips softly pass over every part of me…
Once again I am entirely gone.
Satisfied, you are done, trying a smile.
As you leave, I neither feel, nor grieve.
You bring out the very best I am….
Your puppet on a string.
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Reviews of "You own My Heart III"
Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
Reviewed on January 30, 2004
Oh such a nice ending walt...loved this ...floria
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on January 30, 2004
Oh, I liked the mechanics of the poem very much but I have to agree with Jim, a dangling, waiting for her to pull my strings, puppet I would not care to be.
To each his own. Somehow I don't think I would care for the puppet part. This reminds me of an old song by Kenny Rogers and the First Edition, "But You Know I Love You". It's told from the opposite point of view, however.
When I wrote ths book in 2000, I was concerned about children having access to the Internet and to chat rooms where "you can be anyone you want." Here we are many years later and the situation with children talking freely to stangers on the Internet
The Psychic Dimension, Part II (558 pages) is a collection of 36 sci-fi/paranormal stories and the new work is the companion book to Jay Dubya's The Psychic Dimension.
There was once a very special person in my life... also
about a year ago he turned around and walked away....but in my case
never returned to me!!
It hurts...it hurts bad I know!!
Love your poem....although it made me so very sad!!
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Love Tinka