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for a little while
by audrine max → (All Poetry by audrine max)
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I never thought that at the peak

Peace is a plateau of greens

Serenity is an overwhelming wave

Giving soul to an arising analysis

I run with the wind

On this field of impeccable dreams

I can almost cry

Having experienced this

Profound joy

Connection that is so fluid

She stole the yellow morning rays

Perforated my world with light

If that isn’t enough

She befriended

The flowers that took the sun

Balance, is what

She brought into my life

I don’t know how

But, she did it

Her influence

Is something more

Something else, somehow

In return,

I’m passing on compassion

Kindness she showed me

Needs to be shared

The world needs more of her

I’m her catalyst

She’s my balance

She made me realize

We’re all here

To reach out

Forget about ourselves

There’s a wonderful connection

Waiting at the end

The fruits it will bear

Pass it on

Until, we’re all infected

Our world can never be perfect

At least we tried

In time, we will all realize

That compassion is more important

Than our premiered self acceptance

Once you do,

Trust me,

For a little while

You feel free.

 

 


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 Reviews of "for a little while"
Reviewed by Jms Bell
Reviewed on June 15, 2014
PEACE...THAT SURPASSES ALL UNDERSTANDING IS PROMISED...WHEN WE SEEK IT... DILIGENTLY. THANKS FOR SHARING. LOVE, BLESSINGS AND PEACE...JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by Mary Cochrane
Reviewed on June 11, 2014
Wow! The wealth of your words is simply outstanding. Lovely write.

Reviewed by Patrick Granfors
Reviewed on June 10, 2014
This is brilliant.
Maybe you should mentoring.

Patrick

Reviewed by D.T. de Bruijn
Reviewed on June 10, 2014
I can totally agree with both the feeling of joy, and also about compassion. You have expressed it very well. Thanks.

Reviewed by J. Roseline
Reviewed on June 10, 2014
very good poetry , i enjoy your write Jk

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on June 10, 2014
I can't help thinking that the "she" you are referring to is mother nature. When I'm in nature I always feel relaxed, calm, refreshed and especially, free.

Ron

Reviewed by Clarence Prince
Reviewed on June 10, 2014
Yes, "For a little while
You feel free" That's a blessing!

Reviewed by E Phillips
Reviewed on June 10, 2014
Very elegant, spiritual and philosophical
A rendezvous with Nature is greeted with compassion...
Nice thoughts, nice poem, nice lady.

Reviewed on June 10, 2014
I have a very good feeling about this. My dear friend, you are so talented. With a wealth of vocabulary you can just about to write the perfect poem each time. I'm sure you are yourself I have no reasons to doubt you. Enjoying the perfection of your words each time you bring to us! Yes, without the compassion and kindness in us, all other worldly goodness mean nothing!

Sandie

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on June 10, 2014
The world can truly use far more Compassion these days.


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