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encapsulated
by audrine max → (All Poetry by audrine max)
Friday, September 11, 2015    Rated "PG" by the Author.
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Poetry

 

They say

Darkness encapsulated 

The very essence i breathe

Like how a child is kept

In a mother's womb for survival

It never hit them that-

I am being reborn

Almost drifting

Reaching the surface

Metamorphosis, 

An oasis of changes

Cracking open

The civilized conformity

Cemented on

Caterpillar of angst

I'll bloom before your eyes

Like a flower

Thriving wildly in the spring

 

Oh yes, i'm lost

Between tunnels of my unseen mind

Though psychosis is

Still blinded by

My firm grasp on reality

I tamper this mask of comfort

For the fantasies to take me away

Conquer the great loss

A depression i have succumbed into

Mystified in this abundance

Of pillars crumbling back

Down to earth 

Rebuilding a new world

Abhor the unoriginal thought

Devoid of death

It will never come

Coz i am an energy

I once was created

By the aboriginal books of the ancient

But i believe 

What physics had stated at the latter part

I can never be destroyed

My soul floats on this 

Experience called humanity

 

As Earth mandated a rule

Of temporary existence

It's beautiful

This thing we barely comprehend

A gift to perpetuate love

And only love

Isn't it tremendous

To be walking on bare feet

Connecting the only forces that mattered

A never ending cycle

Of dark and light

Ain't nothing wrong if

I get lost for a lil' while

 

Define the emotion

That has been written

And you summoned

Every part of your intellect to understand

We can never arrive

At the same point of conclusion

Coz our journeys

Were never meant to be the same

You have yours

I have mine

But while we are here

Let's get drunk 

In this revolutionized magnificence

Simply put as- LIFE

How dare we, 

Choose nothingness 

Coz we're too afraid 

To acknowledge 

And be eaten by our own darkness

Shouldn't we be more afraid?

Petrified of threading

A safe passionless flight..

 

 


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 Reviews of "encapsulated"
Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on August 24, 2019
My goodness this goes deep. Carry me above the fray and let me linger in the abyss of nothingness which I gladly accept. There in the shadows of my thoughts lies the nothingness of reality which I now accept.

Reviewed by Jms Bell
Reviewed on November 24, 2015
WHEN IS LIGHT THE BRIGHTEST? IN THE DARKNESS! NEW BIRTH IS A WONDERFUL THING! AN AWARENESS OF GOD'S PRESENCE IS OUR LIVES IS A BLESSING THAT CANNOT BE IMAGINED...COME FORTH! THANKS FOR SHARING. LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FAITH...JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by Howard Atkinson (Reader)
Reviewed on September 19, 2015
I'm sometimes a bit apprehensive about reading your poetry, Audrine.
But you draw me in ...often to places I don't think I'm wanting to go ! You write with such power and feeling, it often feels like the words are striking at me. Compelling poetry, says the BBWG.

Reviewed by Ashiff Jivraj
Reviewed on September 18, 2015
A very nice deep poem. Lots of philosophical visuals. Ashiff

Reviewed by D. Vegas (Reader)
Reviewed on September 17, 2015
Be who you are meant to be is what I received from your poem...taking charge of your life as others are the captains of their own destiny as well.

Always,
Deborah

Reviewed by KJ McPhee
Reviewed on September 15, 2015
Profound philosophical metaphysical flight.

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on September 14, 2015
You have about encapsulated the entire human experience.

Ron

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK
Reviewed on September 13, 2015
9-13-2015:

Simply KOOL...

TRASK...

Reviewed by Clarence Prince
Reviewed on September 13, 2015
"A never ending cycle
Of dark and light"
It's more like our world nowadays!
Well done, Audrine!

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on September 12, 2015
This is deeply meaningful because you share your soul through your verses, Audrine. Believe it or not, there is much tat you express to which I completely relate. Thank you for sharing. Love and best wishes to you,

Regis

Reviewed on September 12, 2015
Great poem, Audrine! You always write and express so well in your poetry, with such great execution of words!! Love this!!!

Sandie

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
Reviewed on September 12, 2015
"Caterpillar of angst" Understand and love that phrase. You took on a subject within the lines of this interesting (to say the least) poem and did a fantastic job of projecting that angst amid all the darkness and the upheaval going on in your world.

"Ain't nothing wrong if
I get lost for a lil' while" . . . Damn straight ain't nothing wrong. Do your thing.

Reviewed by E Phillips
Reviewed on September 11, 2015
Next time I'm in your part of the world, you and I are going to get drunk on Manila beer--love will take care of itself. :-)


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