self discovery (poem) by audrine max on AuthorsDen

self discovery
by audrine max → (All Poetry by audrine max)
Thursday, October 19, 2017 Rated "G" by the Author.

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love is like a solemn lullaby a splendid melody an encounter of the heart no, not just romantic rather intimate the binding of spirit neglecting that oh so beloved ego your mind might have spoken intelligently logical in terms never lost in comprehension it might have welled deepest memories stories you'll never tell and yes, you are sensible and critical about what is right and ideal but- you keep forgetting tugging it away yes, you are comprehensible but you lack understanding too afraid to feel unwilling to be vulnerable honey, it's killing your soul drag that heart out let passion maneuver be blinded with emotions laugh at the madness cry, wildly as you see snippets of you curled up in a ball honey you cannot dare not miss the picturesque scene just because you are unable to move breathe- just breathe crawl, coz there is so much courage waiting to be unleashed be overwhelmed let your heart feel every goddamn thing that is why we are here to learn so don't use the mind to be your fortress let it cope let it heal let it be one with its spirit can't you hear it has been screaming since the day you decided to separate thoughts and will the heart and mind they are the greatest lovers we only witness such ordeal if we let go permit the body is their vessel their temple thus exist- a sacred alignment of mind, body, and spirit the holy trinity what love can ever be more greater than this? the introduction of the soul made the mind prolific now words suddenly bear their meaning look at you- radiating, epitomizing beauty.

Reviewed by m j hollingshead

Reviewed on October 21, 2017

nice lyric quality, enjoyed reading your poem

never stop writing!
m

Reviewed by John Domino

Reviewed on October 19, 2017

A very touching romantic poetic piece of work. Pray that it works out. Amen

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

A deeply meaningful write, Audrine. Well done! Love and best wishes,

Regis

Reviewed by Michael Schafer

What a write! Ditto what Edward said. I will have to share this with my daughter. At 36, She is just now learning how to live independently. She has been in relationships that were mostly bad because she didn't want to be alone. She is now learning from her mistakes rather than to keep repeating them.

Reviewed by Ronald Hull

It's good to see you posting again. And from this poem I would say discovering yourself all over again. Quite an enlightenment, I must say.

Ron

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton

Lady, you brought it to him with this honest appraisal of his lackluster life. If this is written with someone in mind, I hope he reads and applies himself to your thoughts and words.

Reviewed by Budd Nelson

insightful

Reviewed by E Phillips

This is simply brilliant!
Your creative antenna was certainly tuned into the Universe
when you penned this stunning poem. It moved me to a place
where I had never been before. How lucky we are to have one
as talented as you in our midst. Thank you audrine. You are
a gem to treasure, now and always. ~Ed