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Good Morning!
by Kate Burnside → (All Poetry by Kate Burnside)
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GOOD MORNING!


We enter from the wings of sleep
like walkers off the hills of dreams -
hungry, sweaty,
void of all but soreness.

The usual scene is set before us:
the empty frig,
the unemptied dishwasher.

Our faces, barely awake,
are crumpled like the moody sheets;
we should know better
than to prologue
over the final drop of milk.

The old breakfast argument
spills like coffee:
ground, dry-roasted,
the same brand every time.

The one-line chorus
parrot repeats:
"Not my turn",
"Well, not my turn!"

The next act in the bathroom
is better...

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 Reviews of "Good Morning!"
Reviewed by Paul Williams
Reviewed on May 4, 2005
Lol know this very well, especially not my turn...and have you noticed when your your busting the bathroom is always occupied.

Paul;-]

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on May 3, 2005
our parrots must be in telepathic communication ;) excellent capture with just a tad of sacrcasm ...

Reviewed by Henry Stevens
Reviewed on May 3, 2005
Reality poem, well crafted, sparse. Good work. Henry

Reviewed by L. Figgins
Reviewed on May 3, 2005
Lol! Great write, Kate. I love "faces are crumpled like the moody sheets". Brilliant. I miss those parrot calls. Things are so quiet since my daughter left the nest. That's one more thing you'll have to adjust to as a mom, Kate...

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on May 3, 2005
A morning in black and white word picture,much more powerful
than color would have been. Excellent strokes Kate!;-)

en-ami~Alrisha

Reviewed on May 3, 2005
Kate,

Gee, how come my mornings aren't as interesting? Compared to yours, mine is positively boring!!!!!! LOL

Yours came vividly to life with the power of your descriptive words--well done!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :)

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on May 3, 2005
I can relate to this having raised three daughters and survived their teenage years with only one bathroom and why do I suspect there is more to come of this little saga? Clean no frills but very clever write Kate.

Felix

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on May 3, 2005
LOL I can just see this as you have painted the picture so well.


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