I want to do that to your words! Maybe if some of them would soak into my parched soul...siiggghhhhh. You are a wonder, Kate, your words invigorate and refresh--like water!! LOL
"Like Water" manages to capture most everything a passionate love ought be, Kate. Reminds me of a country song that absolutely engaged me in a similar way. Think it was called "Like Holy Water." Water attracts me more than any of the other elements. Matter of fact, I can't imagine heaven without water. Loved this poem, Dawn
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on May 16, 2005
Kate? You got water on the brain?
Sounds like this water is waaay to hot to drink.
Sure could be interesting the next time we go up town for a drink..lol
Kate you did it again, mastered the poem, and the readers
with your genius for words! Kudo's! Keep splashing;-)
(you have everyone needing a cold shower;-)!
My dearest Kate... though a bit of a slow learner, I now am fully aware that when I click to read you, I prepare myself: you render me speechless. Love poems have been around even longer than I (imagine that!) and are packed to the rafters in AD... then there's this one.
I must believe that writers, good ones, strive to say "it" as it's never been said, to quietly or loudly stun a reader and bring her/him back for more. You make it look effortless, a star alone, that shines with no need of another. Oh, I know I go on and on... but this poem (already in my library) is what the rest of us strive for. I read it 3 times, proving that I am self-indulgent and you are dessert for the head. When I read this kind of metaphoric genius, I get giddy. Sigh. kontemplatin' katy xox
“Being a couple yet free is our next challenge on the evolutionary ladder. This book successfully helps us unravel the myths that block that achievement. It does it with warmth, with readability, and with balance. It recreates everyday problems and
I met Jerome on a busy city street in Baltimore, Maryland, when he was forty-five years old. On that particular day, I was out and about, enjoying a much-needed day off from work.
I wanted to purchase a sukiyaki sub. I parked my car in an area of
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This is intimate,sensual and would deliver quite an impact
if performed, which it does sound beautiful read alound by the way!
I want to do that to your words! Maybe if some of them would soak into my parched soul...siiggghhhhh. You are a wonder, Kate, your words invigorate and refresh--like water!! LOL
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :)
A wonder this is, a wonder you are--
Sounds like this water is waaay to hot to drink.
Sure could be interesting the next time we go up town for a drink..lol
fun fun fun..
Splash splash splash...
Paul;-]
with your genius for words! Kudo's! Keep splashing;-)
(you have everyone needing a cold shower;-)!
Love,
Alrisha
I must believe that writers, good ones, strive to say "it" as it's never been said, to quietly or loudly stun a reader and bring her/him back for more. You make it look effortless, a star alone, that shines with no need of another. Oh, I know I go on and on... but this poem (already in my library) is what the rest of us strive for. I read it 3 times, proving that I am self-indulgent and you are dessert for the head. When I read this kind of metaphoric genius, I get giddy. Sigh. kontemplatin' katy xox
Take care,
Sherry
Blessings,
Joseph
You're the mastercraft lady wordsmith, you never ceases to amaze me with your poetry. It's such joy to read.
Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)