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Mother Love
by Kate Burnside → (All Poetry by Kate Burnside)
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Posted with reverence, awe and respect... and, as it were, with confusion and pain. K xx


MOTHER LOVE

A dying baby is cradled in strong arms. Hot tears wash caked-on sweat and blood from his deeply-furrowed brow and silvered lights are smoothed tenderly from his filthy tousled hair, replenishing its auburn youth. “Kiss me, Mummy” the last gasp wrung from parched, cracked lips, as if spoken through the raw ooze of his brutal blown-off side…

…“And this, Ma’am, is how your husband died, lying there in my arms, thinking I was you” is how the soldier later wrote home to his bereaved wife, “’Kiss me, Honey’ his final breath”.

The young widow wished she could cuddle this boy, the one who had succoured her husband on his battlefield deathbed. “In war”, she thought, “we are all mothers and all sons.”

She walked to the swing in the high pine, the one where they played together as neighbouring children; the one where they later sat and kissed; the place where they had become engaged. Back then their earth seemed always to be bathed in a maternal peace that embraced their future warmly. She lay face down in the lush green grass, weeping her prayer that Mother would love her and take her life too; that family might be together again.

In a distant battle zone, the soldier lay down with her.


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 Reviews of "Mother Love"
Reviewed on June 9, 2006
A very strong and deeply moving write!
B&R

Reviewed on May 30, 2006
Powerful! Well done!

Reviewed by Carole Mathys
Reviewed on May 29, 2006
Thank you Kate for this hauntingly beautiful, heart rending write...I too, know the pain of losing a son...tears
love and peace, Carole

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM
Reviewed on May 29, 2006
Ok, well you have now ripped my heart from my chest and cast it upon that lawn to wither and beat no more. Every life is precious and the ones given so humbly that we may live in freedom are much more difficult to accept. A sacrifice far greater than I would have the courage to make, and they made that sacrifice for me and for you, knowing us not. This is a stunning piece, Kate and you are right, we are all mothers in this situation and we each weep and bleed for the one who gave them life. I know that it was never her intent to lose her child to battle and the word Hero will never be enough to describe them and the word pain will never be enough to express her feelings of grave loss.
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on May 29, 2006
Very sad and moving with a truth in it that will touch all who read it.

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on May 29, 2006
Well Kate the Great,you did it again! I too think it's one of your best for the sheer scope and depth of understanding what a mother feels when losing a son. Having lost one I could never write about it, but this does it for me. Thanks for sharing!

eT

Reviewed by Jane Rodway (Reader)
Reviewed on May 29, 2006
I think this is your best ever and you should expand on into a novel.

Reviewed by Chanti Niven
Reviewed on May 29, 2006
I don't think a single person can read this and not get choked up. I cannot even imagine the grief that a mother feels to lose her son in this way. A brilliant write by a brilliant writer.
Chanti

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on May 29, 2006
Haunting and beautifully sad if that can be. This one captures the whole attention span of the reader and makes him/her want to be there to comfort this women in her grieve. This is one of the best grief for war loss poems I have read Sweet Kate...very well done.

Felix

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on May 29, 2006
This was very moving Kate.

How unfathomable and mysterious those last moments can be, and how they imbue the mind and heart of those left behind with the need to believe in something other than ourselves.

This offering resembled prose in its format and flow!

Many blessings
Richard

Reviewed on May 29, 2006
Outstanding Kate, how very poignant and excellent you have written this deeply moving poem, really got to me today..

Reindeer

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on May 29, 2006
deeply moving, this prosaic encapsulation of war's ramifications on both the living and the dead, reminds us of the human suffering and compassion both within and outside the battlefield ...

Reviewed by Paul Williams
Reviewed on May 29, 2006
Oh! dearest Kate, I think you know that this superb piece of prose has a deep resonance with me...it's certainly got me all choked up again. A truly excellent piece, Kudos!

Paul

Reviewed by Peter Paton
Reviewed on May 29, 2006
Kate
Touches all the right nerves and chords, this extra special and extraordinary pen..
The immeasurable depth and profoundness of true love echoes throughout this magnificent narrative
Thanks for sharing
Love and Peace
Peter

Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen
Reviewed on May 29, 2006
A poignant write, Kate. I'm there on that grassy knoll...
Peace,
Carolyn

Reviewed by F William Broome
Reviewed on May 29, 2006
On Rememberance Day in your country, and in Canada, we are three nations whose people have this speacal time to commemorate the war dead. Your pen has added considerably to this. I thank you for a brilliant and kind offering to such heritage.
- Bill

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on May 29, 2006
The little white lie the soldier told was necessary and apropos. Beautifully written.

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
Reviewed on May 29, 2006
I wept.
The sadness and fear along with the emotional pull gripped me. I agree with the others. You've written a verse that will pull at the heart with the reality and loss war brings to many a family all over this earth.
Susan

Reviewed by Ch'erie de Perrot
Reviewed on May 29, 2006
Yes I have to agree with ED.
You have penned a rather extraordinary write to describe such pain and sorrow, well done.
Recently here we had a terrible debacle, over one of our Soldiers who was gunned down whilst he typed at his laptop, then when he was flown home, they mixed the bodies up, and had to go find the right one. The families anguish was terrible, the PM had to apologize profusely for the stuff up. If the whole ugliness of war isnt enough, to add insult to injury and do that, fair go!!!

I really liked this write m8 TY
Hugs
Ch'erie

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on May 29, 2006
Read with reverence, awe, and respect, having known far too many fallen soldiers, and the immense suffering of their families.


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