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The Fastening
by Kate Burnside → (All Poetry by Kate Burnside)
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Dayumm... I'm feeling good! :)) Am almost up to my correct tally of poems for the Month Of Poetry challenge: 16 out of 17 days! Be glad you have been spared most of them, though! K xx


THE FASTENING


Like hooks and eyes
we’re small, fiddly;

barely managing to
find each other,
let alone meet.

But our soft buttons
have been pressed;

like with those silk-covered
pearls on a wedding night,
our heat-swollen fingers
fumble, shape-feeling the dark.

And too tight these loops
of restraint: we can never
slip them over or off too easily.

The thread of me catches
on the barb of your smile
as with precision you eye
the fine point of my needle.

No sticky, quick-fix
fluff-collecting velcro
attachment is this;

we’re zipped ‘til our teeth
rust together.

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 Reviews of "The Fastening"
Reviewed on May 7, 2008
WOW! What a poem!
The imagery is astounding!
Got me thinkin'
Write On!
Warmest Blessings and Inner Peace, Warrior Purple PaSsion Shexooo

Stay Positive!

Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on May 3, 2008
I like the tautness in this, the control heightening the impact

Reviewed by Elizabeth Price
Reviewed on April 27, 2008
lol. With grim determination the zippers will remain forever. Excellent Liz

Reviewed by Olita Williams
Reviewed on April 26, 2008
*on the barb of your smile* what a wonderful snapshot. Thank you for this sensual offering.

Reviewed by Gaylen Sharp
Reviewed on April 25, 2008
Electric, these mundane thoughts almost sizzle to life. I don't know why but it makes me think about going out and smelling the roses I meant to ignore today.

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on April 20, 2008
clever, cute & catchy ... heightened humor, indeed ... luv the imagery ...

Reviewed by Axilea MU
Reviewed on April 20, 2008
Very clever and enjoyable, Kate. The end is incredibly dynamic and precise.

Axilea

Reviewed on April 19, 2008
A witty bit of convergence you give us Kate! Now, how do you know we want to be "spared" of those poems in hiding?
Cheers and love ~~ Micke

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on April 19, 2008
Delightfully amusing and humorously creative as you can do. Glad you are doing okay...

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Cryssa C
Reviewed on April 18, 2008
Well, I must say I don't think I will ever think of zippers in quite the same way! hee, hee...
But with all that plastic coating they put on the teeth nowadays, do zippers still rust? For this poem's sake, I hope so. :~)
So uniquely you... Love it!
Cryssa :~)

Reviewed by A PAX
Reviewed on April 18, 2008
hahahahahahaaaaaaaaaa
and a big awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww
love it!!! so creative........got frosting??? :) pax A

Reviewed by Barbara Smith
Reviewed on April 18, 2008
Kate, there's so much to like in this writing. I'd say it's clever and caused this reader to smile and enjoy to the end.

Reviewed by Bernice Angoh
Reviewed on April 18, 2008
"The thread of me catches
on the barb of your smile
as with precision you eye
the fine point of my needle." This my friend is beautiful!

Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on April 18, 2008
Kate this is cleaver and makes me smile :)

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on April 18, 2008
Kate,

Everything would be so much easier if it were a velcro world. (lol)
Good one. Excellent metaphors. Peace, Love and Blessings Always, Paul.

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
Reviewed on April 17, 2008
You have one incredible way to think! This is excellent. I love the last line.

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on April 17, 2008
Very nice writing Kate,enjoyed..take care...HUgsssss

Reviewed by Morning Star
Reviewed on April 17, 2008
Wow I love ...we’re zipped ‘til our teeth
rust together
Beautifully expressed
Excellent creative write!!!
Brilliant Piece!!
Peace Love And Hugssss....Morning Star

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
Reviewed on April 17, 2008
Yep...zipped up and sealed in an ambrace that is a wonderful haven for true hearts.
Blessings and love,
Susan

Reviewed by H Cruz
Reviewed on April 17, 2008
Now I'm a big fan of duct tape but I like your words much better. ;)

Reviewed by Bill Grimes Jr.
Reviewed on April 17, 2008
Outstanding poetry my friend. Beautiful and flowing......peaceful.....

Much love,

Bill :-)

Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg
Reviewed on April 17, 2008
omg Kate, this is amazing. I absolutely love it!

Reviewed by Charlie
Reviewed on April 17, 2008
Splediforous relationship poem... I love the analogies here... I like each strophe for a different reason. 5, 6 and the last are my very favorites... perfect ending too-- visual, but something more than that... it contains such a powerful resolution, that the reader cannot help but feel that-- up to his chin... --Charlie

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on April 17, 2008
I like this one Kate, the balance of velcro on one side against the zipper on the other is like a casual affair only to satisfy desire compared to the quality and strength of love that is meant to last forever. Well done my dear friend. enjoyed this one.
hugs
Pops

Reviewed by F William Broome
Reviewed on April 17, 2008
Me Gawd, Girl, you've gone daft! And, to think, you remember every blasted move to move, and finally surrender! What lengths you do take in poetry telling your tales... and this is dayum goodun' Your mind and the US Government; dysfunctional but effective! Great writing, too!
- Bill

Reviewed by Ted Bossis
Reviewed on April 17, 2008
Again the expansive sense of beauty avails itself _ evol smaerd .~.Tedso

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on April 17, 2008
love this!! fantastic, creative write!

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on April 17, 2008
If this isn't an award winning gem,I don't know what would be! I love your sense of humor Kate!;-)Unique and delightful!ET

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on April 17, 2008
You are an insane female-type person . . . I'd love to sit down and have a few with ya . . . I love your take on just about everything . . . Even silly stuff . . . Uh huh, like this . . . Love it I tell you . . .

Reviewed by Larry Lounsbury
Reviewed on April 17, 2008
Really enjoyed this picture of fumbling bliss.

Reviewed by Gianetta Ellis (Reader)
Reviewed on April 17, 2008
Wow. Wow. Beyond that, speechless.

Reviewed on April 17, 2008
Kate you have the most amazing mind and put the most unique spins on your poetry, what metaphors!

Reviewed on April 17, 2008
Kate,

Oooohhhhhhh - s u b l i m e, to be meshed this close!!!!!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed on April 17, 2008
Delightful write, Kate; brava!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in America, Karen Lynn. :D


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