the ripping at the cords melodies out of tune cant keep the rhythm and cant keep a tune heart is out of sync mind is out of kilter
heartache that I feel pain deep inside are we supposed to feel this way when the love has died ?
E.Bretton
15 June 2004
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Reviewed by Martin Hebert (Reader)
Reviewed on June 27, 2004
Doos love ever really die?...This is beautiful...makes me tear
marty
Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger (Reader)
Reviewed on June 17, 2004
Your brilliant thoughts and well-crafted Poetry are absolutely remarkable, Poet!!! Only You have the answer buried deep inside your unbelievably talented mind and warm heart, Poet!!! Outstanding write and artwork!!! Thank you for sharing it.
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