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The Hardest Part....
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 The Hardest Part... …


What my love has sent you there
once more into the breach
so close and yet so distant
and so far out of reach.


Something in my soul cried out
in my heart there was no doubt.
You faded into oblivion
now a spectre, a blurry vision.


Who my love was it that hurt you?
were you played; emotions fused?
seduced you with her love
then stole away ..... from you.


Did I deserve the tears that followed
when you, my life left hollowed?
Did you feel the need to do
what someone else had done to you?


The hardest part; to try forget
all this love, inside me yet
I can’t believe you’d hurt me so
ignore the love, just turn and go!



© E. Bretton – all rights reserved
8 July 2004

 

 

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 Reviews of "The Hardest Part...."
Reviewed by Peter Paton
Reviewed on July 14, 2004
A wounded heart and a wounded souls is a terrible combination .
Yet Elga , the Light still doth shine for them that keep the faith , God will requit in full measure those who are faithful to him , and him alone .

Peter Paton

Reviewed by Fletcher Bailey (Reader)
Reviewed on July 11, 2004
Elga...another very emotional write that speaks the truth of betrayal and having trust stolen...great artwork and even greater poetry...Fletcher B

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on July 10, 2004
This one Elga is so emotional the questions the hidden thoughts of heart ache... Excellent poetry.

LP

Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger (Reader)
Reviewed on July 10, 2004
The hardest part for me is holding back the tears as I read your very powerfully beautiful and yes even the extremely heartwrenching poetry such as this, Elga!!!… You have such a marvelous gift and dynamic way of expressing yourself through your timeless creations!!!… It is a true honor to read your outstanding work!!!… Thank you for sharing it…. Bravo Poet!!!

Reviewed on July 10, 2004
"The Hardest Part..." does what Poetry commands in art and emotions...
in the creation of BEAUTY.

I salute You, Sublime Poet!


Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed by J. Pajot
Reviewed on July 10, 2004
Sad tale of false love that is very well expressed. Wonderfully done.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on July 10, 2004
Bittersweet Write Elga!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by E. Richardson
Reviewed on July 9, 2004
So much sadness but so much reality in this...well done, Elga

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on July 9, 2004
Elga,you cover so much with this gem! So sad, to see the
romance die on the vine, because of what another has done.
How well I know this scene! Superb poetry!The art is gorgeous!

Reviewed by Martin Hebert (Reader)
Reviewed on July 9, 2004
so sad~~yet so strong and hard~~beautiful~~marty

Reviewed on July 9, 2004
Soft, sweet write! Thanks for sharing, Elga! Well done!

(((HUGS))) to you from the United States, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by A PAX
Reviewed on July 9, 2004
bravo........... so real! So many songs are dedicated to this agony.....i guess its just a part of life......so sad, and undeserved......well done! pax.......A

Reviewed by Lori Moore
Reviewed on July 9, 2004
Sad, yet sweet romance. Enjoyed.


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