Now this one cuts to the quick for me. It reminds me of how I felt when deep in the throes of depression. I'm much better now, but the memory of those days will always be with me. Not that this poem makes me depressed. I actually like it. A little touch of melancholy now and then keeps us all on our toes.
Reviewed by Amira van Kerk (Reader)
Reviewed on July 21, 2004
Dear Elga,
what an excellent write. For a minute I thought it was me you wrote about. But there are probably so many of us, sitting in the same boat.
All the best.
ouch, this one hurts--so profoundly emotional--well done, poet!
(((((HUGS))))) and love, karla.
Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger (Reader)
Reviewed on July 21, 2004
Elga, on the merits of this fantastic creation, I fine it to be a very unique, powerful, professional polished piece of timeless poetry. Outstanding work and artwork, Poet.
The healing comes from within...when we connect with our inner self ...then we bounce back with renewed confidence and vigour..!!!
Peter Paton
Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Reviewed on July 21, 2004
Such an emotionally gripping write, beautifully penned.
Reviewed by Martin Hebert (Reader)
Reviewed on July 21, 2004
Elga~~your saddness touches me throught this beautiful poem~~
~~martin~~
Reviewed by Fletcher Bailey (Reader)
Reviewed on July 21, 2004
Elga...this is a very well written emotion packed write...superb last line stanza sets it off prefectly...I agree with Paul, this is the perfect release for all the shitty things life can deal us all...and the way you write it brings a certain prolific life to your work that really makes the reader think...great poem...Fletcher B
Elga,
A very emotional piece. It is so hard to put up a front when one is hurting so. I think if it were not for these fronts that emotional breakdowns would run rampant. Excellent write.
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that was ripped from under you.'
I can relate to this, a sad write!
THE CLOSING LINE BLOCKS THE FLOW.
Please check the first stanza.
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"A Silent Death..." delivers a profound message of life through its poetical line, which made me learn and inspired me.
Keep sharing Your treasures, Poet!
Healthy Long Life.
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
what an excellent write. For a minute I thought it was me you wrote about. But there are probably so many of us, sitting in the same boat.
All the best.
ouch, this one hurts--so profoundly emotional--well done, poet!
(((((HUGS))))) and love, karla.
The healing comes from within...when we connect with our inner self ...then we bounce back with renewed confidence and vigour..!!!
Peter Paton
~~martin~~
A very emotional piece. It is so hard to put up a front when one is hurting so. I think if it were not for these fronts that emotional breakdowns would run rampant. Excellent write.
Very deep emotional piece!!
Warm Love Tinka