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Debt Of Gratitude
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This poem was inspired by Author's Den writer Ed Kostro's tribute to his late and great friend Ben.

I too had a great friend and mentor, Jim Deary ,who was taken away suddenly at  the young age of thirty eight of a brain haemorrhage

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I stood alone in the cemetery at your unmarked and forlorn lair

as dusk settled uneasily all around the ancient graveyard

a solitary raven croaked, perched unsteadily on a tombstone

as I pondered over your sudden demise

my mum always said," Only the good die young son ",

now I know she spoke the truth, as ever

you were cut down in your prime

a family man, with a beautiful wife and sweet children

there is no justice in this world that's for sure

don't even try to work it all out, you will always fail

we walk blindly in a vale of mystery and intrigue

nothing is as it seems to be

and your world can be shattered without warning

leaving you broken and disconsolate inside

I remembered the values and lessons you taught me

free of charge from a heart of gold

I was just a young lad, still grappling to find the way

in an adult's world, surrounded by a maze of conflicting emotions

you instilled confidence and self respect in me

almost like an adopted father figure

teaching me the laws of nature and the universe

educating me in how to be streetwise and astute

so no one would ever take advantage of me

by intimidation or force of will

you taught me how to be a man

and for that I have a debt of gratitude

a passing train rattled noisily in the distance

breaking my train of thought and prayer

my feet shifted in the gravel

crunching me back to reality

and overhead a pale moon rose in the ether

and an early bat came swooping towards me

looping in circles for the night mosquitos

as I made my slow way down the undulating hill

I pulled my collar up around my neck

and turned to look back at the huge cross on the rise

and said " Dear God take care of my best friend "

and at that a tear escaped from my eye

as a vision of his smile and dancing eyes came into view

and I heard your voice firmly say

" Don't grieve for me, its your call to carry the flag "

 

Copyright by Peter Paton 2006
 

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 Reviews of "Debt Of Gratitude"
Reviewed by Regina Pounds
Reviewed on February 26, 2006
Peter, your friend and mentor's influence on you was a gift that lives within you...what a fine testimony you gave in your gratitude!

Gina

Reviewed by Janet Bellinger
Reviewed on February 25, 2006
Beautiful tribute to Jim. I am sure he would be proud of you.

Reviewed by J. Allen Wilson
Reviewed on February 25, 2006
" Don't grieve for me, its your call to carry the flag "

Peter, this is touching beyond measure. Tis so time to raise the standard on high, for our days are not in our hands...but His.

well done.

Reviewed on February 24, 2006
So sorry, best friends are rare and once they're gone it is hard to keep going. it often seems as if we have to 'learn new steps' to take in order to keep going. This is a wonderful loving tribute to a dear friend!
Birgit and Roger

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on February 24, 2006
Death brings to us so many memories and thoughts. That in itself is a gift. Thank you for sharing this with us :-)

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on February 24, 2006
This man's gift of life is interwoven into the fabric of your words and feelings here, Peter. It IS remarkable how some of the most wonderful "Givers" seem to be "taken" most inopportunely, to our way of thinking. Our loss is Heaven's gain, perhaps... or, hopefully, THEIRS - if Heaven is all we believe it to be cracked up to be! Hard for those left behind, though. A wonderful portrait of both the man and the impact he has made upon you. He has, as you say, passed the baton on and will doubtless help you bear it. My condolences in your loss and may you find comfort in your needful mourning. Bless you and thank you. Kate xx

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on February 24, 2006
Great tribute Peter!!

My daughter also died form a brain haemorrhage!!

Not easy to forget!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater
Reviewed on February 24, 2006
My father died at the age of 47, the same age I am, from a brain stroke seventeen years ago. I miss him very much. You see, he just turned 17 years old the day after I was born. Only the good die young. There are so many lines here, Peter, which remind me of my father, especially "remembered the values and lessons you taught me." Thanks for the reminder Debt of Gratitude, Peter.

Sage


Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on February 24, 2006
One of the nicest tributes I've ever read.
And how astute of you, so young, to recognize the specialness of this person in your life. We all have special mentors throughout life, and God bless 'em all.

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on February 24, 2006
Peter such a beautifully written remembrance! Your faith and compassion flow through this poem. Also, your appreciation for
a great friendship which I'm sure your friend would say of you
too. Wonderful tribute!

eT

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM
Reviewed on February 24, 2006
There are those who come into our lives and make a powerful impression upon us; those whom we respect, honor and love with every molecule of our being. When they are gone, we are left with nothing but bittersweet memories and a book that ended before the final chapter could be written. Excellent and heart-touching tribute, Peter. I am glad I stopped by your Den this morning.
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed on February 24, 2006
Peter,

You are in my thoughts during this incredibly sad time in your life; God be with you as you remember your friend!

Beautiful tribute to your friend; such a shame to leave this world so young! Only God koows why he was called Home; we won't know the answers until we are reunited in Glory.

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :( >tears <

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on February 24, 2006
I remembered the values and lessons you taught me
free of charge from a heart of gold

Terribly sorry to hear of your loss, Peter, and thanks for mentioning mine. And this is a marvelous tribute to Jim. Those of us lucky enough to have angelic mentors truly should 'carry their flag' when they leave us - and attempt to pass them on to someone else before we join them.

Reviewed on February 24, 2006
Peter,

A shining tribute to your friend and mentor; I'm sorry for your loss.

(((((HUGS))))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on February 24, 2006
As Christ was carrying His cross he saw the women weeping for Him and He said to them, "Weep not for me but for your children." It's very difficult for us to understand death when it strikes home and a loved one is taken away from us. But we have to consider ourselves blessed for having that person in our lives and take the lessons he or she has taught us to heart and carry on with our lives hopefully passing these lessons onto someone else. I grieve with you and Ed in this loss you both have had.


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