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The Barn Owl
by Peter Paton → (All Poetry by Peter Paton)
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I come to you with open hands and heart

and a smile upon my face, in awe of you

for you have set my soul alight

with your presents of unmitigated joy

and the lovelight that is shining in your eyes

yes you sweetheart, I promise my love good and true

for I will be your bridge over troubled waters

like the spring sun that glints through the trees

and the warm whispering winds that rustles the leaves

our destiny is in being together forever and a day

where we will learn the essentials straight from our hearts

for we shall draw fresh, clear water from the springs of hope

and bathe in the eternal light of the divine

like the wood pigeon released into the sky

our love will soar within the freedom of our spirits

and nothing will shake our citadel of truth

and deep into the magenta colored skies

where the wild fuchsia flourishes by the stream

and the leaping trout disturbs the placid millpond

I will place my faithful ribbon within your hair

and our loving kisses will melt into the dawn

 

Copyright by Peter Paton 2006
 

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 Reviews of "The Barn Owl"
Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on May 9, 2006
Love has a natural way of enhancing our senses.

Ron

Reviewed by A. Santo (Reader)
Reviewed on May 8, 2006
The never ending journey of love starts in so many ways. Our faithfulness to love is seen, felt, and treasured above all else when shared between two hearts who can recognize the precious gifts they are freely given by the love of another. They treasure their secret hearts and know without doubt that in faithfulness to their love all else dissolves into a puddle of nothing. Not time, circumstance, death nor distance can seperate the eternal relations that meld two into one. No law of government, no religous taboo can prevent the mellifluous songs that play softly on the chords of love that cause the sun to rise brighter, the days to glow warmer, and the nights to become a world where the two meet in the secret garden of their souls that are flowering with the fragrances of their eternal bond.

Reviewed on May 8, 2006
Peter:

This one is so romantic and wonderful like a love story. Wonderful verse!

Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on May 7, 2006
One helluva compassionate write Peter....serenity embraced!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater
Reviewed on May 7, 2006
A peaceful easy feeling, Peter! A poetic romance that balances on the branch of eternity, tied with a ribbon pulsating with affairs of the heart.

Sage

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on May 7, 2006
Wonderful heart touching write.

Reviewed by Suzie Palmer
Reviewed on May 7, 2006
Dearest Peter
Love Supreme!!
"...I will be your bridge over troubled waters..." Magnificent heart-write from your heart that oh so knows how to love-right!!
Love & Admiration Suzie :-D
~~ Thank you for the quote site!


Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
Reviewed on May 7, 2006
Peter, You sculpt a romantic interlude with vows and a heart so full it is forever. You amaze me Peter with your diverse look at living and the talent to portary life so vivid in words.
My hats off to you... sweet friend.
Love and harmony,
Susan

Reviewed by J. Allen Wilson
Reviewed on May 7, 2006
The truth of the heart shines in this Peter...excellent

Reviewed by Connie Hinnen Cook (Reader)
Reviewed on May 7, 2006
Full of heady romance & vivid imagery. Lovely!

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on May 7, 2006
a "wise" and beautifully penned celebration of love ...

Reviewed on May 7, 2006
I love owls, and barn owls are no exception! Beautiful write about a magnificent member of the avian world! BRAVO!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in America, Karen Lynn in Texas. :D

Reviewed by Michelle Mills
Reviewed on May 7, 2006
Our loving kisses will melt into the dawn...OOOOOOOOOHHHHHHHH! Love it! Great job Peter. Michelle

Reviewed on May 7, 2006
Peter,

I concur with Jerry--ain't none better. Stellar poetry!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on May 7, 2006
Well, Peter, to coin a phrase, "It don't get any better than this." Love rules!

Reviewed on May 7, 2006
You are indeed a true master of the pen, wonderful poem!
Birgit and Roger

Reviewed by Rhonda Galizia
Reviewed on May 7, 2006



ENCORE!

BEAUX YEUX! LaSuess

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on May 7, 2006
Peter, outstanding prose with a splendid theme that soars into the heavenlies! Love the pic too!

eT

Reviewed by Crystal Silver Angel (Reader)
Reviewed on May 7, 2006
((((Peter )))) precious divine man, sweetest angel,this is sooooo stunning, so beautiful BEYOND WORDS. I'm speechless alot these days... Your beautiful sonnet imagery melts this heart of mine and shows how deeply you are so dedicated to the art of your heart. Your pictoral masterpiece is exceptional in description and from deep within your soul, I know.. Oh to paint such a masterpiece.. Stunning..My dearest, your heart, mind, soul is so guided by the loving adoration of the Almighty. Mmmmmm... I'm in Heavens winds right now as I type this, love..

(((Love Forever, Dove )))


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