Across The Tracks (poem) by Peter Paton on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on May 14, 2006

true love transcends the barriers of race and culture ... good message, Peter ...

Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen

Reviewed on May 14, 2006

Powerful write Peter, thank you for sharing it and be blessed in the writing
God Bless
Michelle!

Reviewed by J. Allen Wilson

Reviewed on May 14, 2006

I liked this Peter...and You and I know that God sees the heart and not the color of ones skin...well done

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM

Reviewed on May 14, 2006

We have little to no control over who we fall in love with, Peter. Families should butt-out and be happy that their child has found true love. It is not about them, it is about you and they need to accept that fact. I am glad that you stuck to your guns, Peter.
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK

Reviewed on May 14, 2006

Hot Romantic You Write On!

TRASK

Reviewed by Crystal Silver Angel (Reader)

Reviewed on May 14, 2006

Dearest Peter,
this really spoke deep in my soul and touched me deeply, precious healer man. It radiates such beauty deep, deep within your soul that the carnal mind�s of others may not always see. It shows what a tremendous gift of grace to have the heart you have�Those glorious Heavens winds look after you so much, Peter.. As always your spirit inspires and heals this dove, me..

(((Love Forever, Dove )))

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter

Reviewed on May 14, 2006

The naked eye sees color...the mind's eye sees harmony in all the living. Your poem is about the heart and this is where love feels without sight interferring. For Mother's Day Mariah gave me a collector's edition of "The Prophet". I've been reading it this morning.
Thanks for your love and insight Peter...for all of us poets.
Susan

Reviewed by Birgit and Roger Pratcher

Reviewed on May 14, 2006

Wonderful Peter, you know we most definitly love this one and will hang on to it,
Birgit and Roger

Reviewed by Ronald Hull

Reviewed on May 14, 2006

Attracts, and sometimes, lasts forever.

Good thoughts, Peter.

Ron

Reviewed by A. Santo (Reader)

Reviewed on May 14, 2006

Love knows only LOVE. And that my dear friend is all one needs to grow stronger in the Grace of creations greatness. The Creator of ALL FLESH AND LIFE used color throught-out creation to show humanity that the more color one has in life the more there is to appreciate and adore.

Good day my dear friend. GOOD DAY :)

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on May 14, 2006

Splendid as always Peter! Creator made all the races, and said they were equal, humanity would be far richer if they would remember that.

eT

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on May 14, 2006

Love knows no boundries!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on May 14, 2006

Love knows no race, creed or color and that's the way it should always be.

Reviewed by ROCK-Salt! Proctor

Reviewed on May 14, 2006

Love knows no bias, no jugdgment, does it find. It takes the heart, and bares it, and if it deems it good; then, to it, binds. Art

Reviewed by Paul Williams

Reviewed on May 14, 2006

Love is all encompasing regardless of colour, creed, or religion...the later however, lay's false claim to the initial concept. Top write Peter.

Paul;-)

Reviewed by Huda Orfali

Reviewed on May 14, 2006

God is definitely the God of all no matter whether we name Him God/Allah or in any foreign tongue.
I love the spirit of the poem and its message
love and peace
Huda

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on May 14, 2006

Love conquers all differences. Wonderful write, Peter!

Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on May 14, 2006

Hey! Love is not respectful of any color barrier. Love supercedes all that mumbo-jumbo. Gotta love it!