My goodness this is breathtaking. So much can be said when trying to capture the essence of all we feel. And often we come up short in its doing, but the rewards of expressing our hearts is the true treasure. For then we know for ourselves that what we believe and experience in our souls is just as important as our actions.

The imagery and flow is fantastic

Wonderful, wonderful~`*

Peter you write with such a unique beauty
straight from the heart
it shows in all that you share with us
its an honor to read you
pax
:)
A

A redemptive and healing offering, Peter. Thank you for sharing it. Love and peace to you,

Regis

Peter,

Very well done; enjoyed~

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in America, Karen Lynn in Texas. :D

Thanks for the prayers; God is in control, and He is taking care of us! :)

So simply stated and a beautifully reflective dedication and prayer for the one you love. Marriage is a partnership and the glue is a spark...if you have that spark, be thankful as few do, but if there is easily recognizable for all to see.
Taylor

Absolutely beautiful, Peter!
B&R

An absolutely gorgeous and introspective poem, Peter. I believe it is as the wick grows short that we realize how much we love the flickering light of the candle. Wonderful work!
Take care,
Sherry

A fine offering Peter!!

Love Tinka

A treasure chest of good thoughts.

Ron

Sublime poem
thanks for sharing
love and peace

Truly open hearted and self expressive talk of what is in your heart and what plagues your soul. You have captured the self reflective thoughts of many of us in this so personal write. Thank you my friend.

Fee

This is a beautiful and dedictaed love you share. I'm very content that you two exist. My mother and father are two others with this dedication and a few couples at church. I know that somewhere there is someone for me too.
Susan

...the thornbirds sing their sweetest song...only after, they, themselves, have been pierced. A treasure of the rarest kind...
This carries Uncommon Beauty, Peter...you are in all my prayers.

love & blessings ~ rhonda

You, dear Peter, are a man who possesses immeasurable talent!

Love & Light,
Joseph

beautiful.

Very beautiful poem, peter
God bless - Mick

Oh sweet! God is our one true confidant. And after acknowledging imperfection(which I personally believe is beautiful because it brings us to truth)we musn't forget to forgive ourselves for this is a source of misery. Very fine, Peter, reads like a psalm. Thank you...

Lin

WOW!
What a heart you have Peter!
A warriors, A poet's, A writer's, an artist's.

You take so much in stride, and aside from all the imperfections we deal with personally, and all the misunderstandings we endure in life, there is still that relentless hope, I see in you, for a better tomorrow, irrespective of who stands in the way, or who we offend, unwittingly, on the paths that we all walk.

You are a dear soul, and one that I respect!

Richard

Thank you Peter for baring your soul, for in doing so you give us the same hope and trust that you have. Tou know Creator so well it is a joy and I'm thankful that we can all receive His unconditional love as well!

eT

(((Peter )))

this just sings such incredible redemption through the Almighty power of love above, agape and many layers of different types of love, love and the intricate life that has beautiful purposes. When as souls we are at this place everything makes so much sense. I pondered yesterday the intensity, grace, wonder, gratitude and redemption that life offers on earth, no mater what circumstances we are in. And I pondered just how grateful I truly am for so many blessings.. Yes it is a treasure chest.. It sings the gratitude, the light, the shelter, the love that is within you and many more who seek the light and love. Life is at it’s sweetest, yes…The time is right to never put life on hold anymore..

Love & Healing, Dove

When we wax about our sins, He listens and forgives. I know this to be a fact.

We're all sinners, otherwise we would not have been in this world. I'm a sinner, you're a sinner, and everyone else is a sinner.

There's no such thing as a perfect person without sins on earth, so don't judge yourself too harshly.

Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)