Within Your Circumference (poem) by Peter Paton on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on June 27, 2006

Expectations? ...From one who is so blessed with this outpouring? I think not...for you see, if one professed this to me, I would be delightfully and wonderfully convinced beyond expectation.
And what a perfect and delicately pure forest trillium in gift to that fair lady within your loving circumfrence. Such a romantic!
Taylor ~

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on June 16, 2006

the depth of love is indeed a pleasure to experience through your words ...

Reviewed by Pier Tyler

Reviewed on June 16, 2006

Wow! Heighten splendor! I like this,
(sending my undying love to the core of your heart).

Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen

Reviewed on June 16, 2006

Beautiful here Peter, keep these coming and be blessed in doing so
God Bless
Michelle!

Reviewed by Connie Hinnen Cook (Reader)

Reviewed on June 16, 2006

Romance at its absolute best, Peter!

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on June 16, 2006

Planet and satellite together... bliss! Continue your lifelong orbit, Peter... it is celestial! :)) TY Kate xx

Reviewed by Huda Orfali

Reviewed on June 16, 2006

Lucky her :)
Beautiful romantic write
thanks for sharing
love & Peace

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on June 16, 2006

Romance pours from every line of this one of a kind Paton origianal. Sweet as summer roses my friend.

Fee

Reviewed by Birgit and Roger Pratcher

Reviewed on June 16, 2006

Oooh, who would not melt away with this beautiful praise! Excellent done, Peter,
B&R

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on June 16, 2006

You express love the way it ought to be, Peter.

Someone put "love" to me this way:

"Love has a different tune: I love you, therefore you are free to do as you wish. My love says you cannot do any wrong in my sight. My love says you cannot hurt me for it would not wish to make you responsible for the way I feel. My love says I am here for you if you want me, or I can be gone if that is what you wish. My love does not depend on your performance to exist - it depends entirely on a choice I make, moment by moment. My love accepts that you may even come to hate me for what I am and it is strong enough not to compromise itself to please you. My love cannot be manipulated. My capacity to love is infinite and is not bound by your feelings or desires."

Thank you for sharing this offering. Love and peace to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Crystal Silver Angel (Reader)

Reviewed on June 16, 2006

(((( Peter ))))
this is breathtaking and so profound piece sent by the Father Lord.. Your spiritual ability to see into the heart of souls into dimensions and the truth of the divine souls are remarkable. I love the way your heart dances and has this powerful anointing and yoke that is beautiful and celestial through the Holy Spirit. .Thank you for this treasure..

Peace & Love,
Dove

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg

Reviewed on June 16, 2006

Such a beautiful sentiment here Peter, and very well penned from a man that feels in deep rivers.

"You rest within my being like a pearl within a shell" certainly reflects the respect and value you put on your mate above your own life. This is one of the fruits of real love I believe - valuing anothers life moreso than your own.

Richard

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on June 16, 2006

Another beauty from your gilded pen, Peter; very well done; and love the picture! Beautiful!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in America, Karen Lynn in Texas. :D

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on June 16, 2006

Encircled by your beautiful poetry, I am this morning, Peter, thank you! The person you write this for is indeed blessed. The readers are definately blessed, as I have been...well done!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson

Reviewed on June 16, 2006

"Within Your Circumberence," a beautiful declaration of love, well defined! Well done, Peter!

Reviewed by Joy Marsh

Reviewed on June 16, 2006

I am a hopeless romantic at heart so this is a real gem Peter. True love is divine.

Joy

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on June 16, 2006

Peter you are a poet extraordinaire, everything you write is superb, and you can write in all genre's! Bravo! This is a glorious poem of love that, the one you wrote it for should treasure!

Love,
Eileen

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on June 16, 2006

Good show Peter. Just don't let her print this out, and oneday make you eat these words..lol

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on June 16, 2006

Wonderful words of love for your sweetheart.

Reviewed by Rhonda Galizia

Reviewed on June 16, 2006

Endless, dreamy sighs...in the shape of tiny hearts....................have left the building, the planet!!!

Noble Sir Paton, I daresay, you are utterly, THE most-romantic poet, that THIS Lady has ever read ...and since my roots are SCOTTISH....meet you on the River Tweed, at Twilight! [lol how dare I resist, amen?]
Perfectly Passionate....Encore! Smiles and Hugs and Love, rhonda

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on June 16, 2006

You shameless romantic, you!

Reviewed by Susan Sonnen

Reviewed on June 16, 2006

lucky lady! the line 'you rest within my being like a pearl inside a shell' is fantastic! it leaves me with such a sense of protection and comfort and true love...

Susan

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on June 16, 2006

Powerfully written from deep within a true romantic's soul, Peter.