Cold beauty reflected in a glint of steel Huntress stalking quietly behind her prey dipping in and out of shadow cloaked in the silence of night Footsteps echo on broken pavement sending a chill to shiver down his spine He half turns glimpse of metallic gleam catching his eye No time to scream Nowhere to run Jagged edge pierces into fragile flesh sending streams of crimson flowing to the ground Gathering him into an embrace she feels his fear rejoices in the life ebbing from his eyes Heart racing as his final gasping breath blows through her hair Vague hint of sorrow washes over her This night's hunt is done but there's always tomorrow
Never got into vampire stuff, but if you are a closet vamp, then stalk away! ;-)
Ron
Reviewed by Robert Fullerton (Reader)
Reviewed on January 22, 2005
Chilled me to the bone..I'll be looking over my shoulder for months.
Thank you, Danielle.
Reviewed by Grim Jack (Reader)
Reviewed on January 22, 2005
We need to talk, you freak o' nature....LOL
Very, very moving, these last few pieces of yours. A few more like this and your journey towards the Dark Side will be complete :-) This is what you were meant to write. Keep it up.
Wow.
Sounds like somebody eharmony.com would set me up with.
I'll go back and edit that "Once in a lifetime fateful meeting."
This is such incredible writing Danielle.
You are awesome. Glad I read this first thing in the morning.
John
Very well done and like Tracey said you can feel the emotion here.
Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on January 20, 2005
Great capture of the hunt!
Reviewed by Tracey L. O' Very (Reader)
Reviewed on January 20, 2005
This is frightening. Can feel every emotion that must be felt in a situation like that, giving the 'insight' to the feeling. Perfect! so scarey!
Tracey
Jason Donovan has a secret.
The Clere's Restaurant's drama has been unfolding in front of his eyes. If he can see it, so can the restaurant's other guests. But there's something the servers aren't telling him, and he will get to the bottom o
Ron
Thank you, Danielle.
Very, very moving, these last few pieces of yours. A few more like this and your journey towards the Dark Side will be complete :-) This is what you were meant to write. Keep it up.
Sounds like somebody eharmony.com would set me up with.
I'll go back and edit that "Once in a lifetime fateful meeting."
This is such incredible writing Danielle.
You are awesome. Glad I read this first thing in the morning.
John
'm not your enemy. Great write almost as if seen by the eyes of the writer.
Felix
Love Tinka
Thank you for the workout.
thanks for sharing Danielle
William .......Peace & Love
Tracey
it's that good! shivers, haunts,seduction
want to read more;-)...
Love Eileen