I've been reading WAY too many romance novels lately...hehe
Candlelight flickers in the breeze Our shadows dance across the wall Your hands reach out from behind, touching, Caressing my shoulders your breath blows through my hair, across my skin Lips descend tracing my ear, moving down my throat Hands slide down touching my breasts slipping down my stomach resting on my thighs I turn to you lips almost touching breath mingling skin pressed to heated skin fingers tracing up my back, pulling me in My hands reach out sliding across your chest up your neck tangling fingers in your hair Tongue slips across your lips, tasting before you gather me in to feast, to ravish amid the shadows on the bed, in the Jasmine secented breeze clinging to the sheets we lay on
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Reviews of "The Seduction"
Reviewed by Hanley Harding (Reader)
Reviewed on August 31, 2005
Dear Danielle;
Very sensual and erotic without being unnecessarily graphic. Good job.
Doc
Reviewed by Amira van Kerk (Reader)
Reviewed on August 21, 2005
Me, too.
Maybe we should stop reading and go out. Can't imagine that all these perfect men only excist in books. They should be out there -somewhere.
Love
Amira
Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger (Reader)
Reviewed on August 14, 2005
Danielle, this is a very invigorating, well-crafted, sensual composition. I enjoyed the well-defined “adult” seriousness and its youthful playfulness of this seductive, passionate piece. Thanks for sharing it. Take good care and be well.
Whoa...hot stuff Danielle and so perfectly formed from beginning to end keeping the reader at least this reader teased and warmed to the topic. May be too many romance novels but I think the writer must be one very passionate lady. Thanks for sharing Danielle.
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Very sensual and erotic without being unnecessarily graphic. Good job.
Doc
Maybe we should stop reading and go out. Can't imagine that all these perfect men only excist in books. They should be out there -somewhere.
Love
Amira
Peter
Excellent!
Love Tinka
you've been missed!
love,
Eileen
Felix