The madness of misunderstanding Oozes with unnecessary suffering
Misinterpretation and the mis-in-communication Misses the point Enabling preventable pain Of frustrating strains
The only worth in striving To find an even ground to dive in Is when people, parties, countries Develop a common goal uniting
A goal that is liberating Finds no freedom in denigrating Wings are formed deeply infiltrating
However, when a component Behaves like an opponent Common ground is missing, not found Perhaps it was never there, in the darkness or the care As humans, it seems we can be actors according to our flair
When misunderstanding grips the mind Move backwards, sideways and forwards too See what it is that’s blocking through
And if communication can’t bridge our kind It’s the madness of indifference that will hurt in time
Very nice poem..love the way you used miscommunication and misunderstanding..you really got the point across..will keep checking back for more..thanks for sharing your work..
Hear ye' Hear Ye' Suzie! GReat WRite, REAd my Disstressed ( if you have extra time K), It reminds me of the feelings you expressed here! Wow! so close anyway. May Hope and FAith Reign True and High! Light,HOPE and PEACE! WArm HuGs, Sheeexoox
Last line is so excellent.
"A goal that is liberating
Finds no freedom in denigrating
Wings are formed deeply infiltrating "
This one caught me up into this poem..........
Strong write Suzie with intense thoughts portrayed and offered as alternatives to the way we should be thinking. IN this current political climate of wars and terrorism maybe it is time to step back, step around or at least look over what is to come.
The e-book version of Sam Vaknin's "Malignant Self - Love - Narcissism Revisited". Contains the entire text: essays, frequently asked questions and
appendices regarding pathological narcissism and the Narcissistic Personality Disorder (NPD).
"when a component
Behaves like an opponent
Common ground is missing"
excellent lines ...
Chrissy
"A goal that is liberating
Finds no freedom in denigrating
Wings are formed deeply infiltrating "
This one caught me up into this poem..........
Regis
When we gaze inside our hearts,... we find all the answers and solutions to life and love's puzzling enigmas and paradoxes..
Sublime message from your gifted pen my friend..
Love and Hugs
Peter
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Well said in a world where apathy abounds.
Allen