Inspired by some newsworthy housing issues involving corruption in Downtown L.A. that for some reason aren't getting any Press...it may also have a broader relevance to various consumer-rights related issues.
The keeper of the gate was only half-awake while guards played cards in leotards with someone on the take
He gave away the keys and turned the other way as jackals scurried by his post chasing down their prey
After their first feeding they greased his dirty hand He smiled through his blind eyes and asked them back again
When approached by bloody victims with indifference he replied "It's all your fault just being here so don't come back inside"
"Y'see the jackals are my friends they helped build this gate I don't give a damn about you or what you have to say You're just a paying tenant and there's many more like you. I'll piss on you and your's It's the best that I can do. So count yourselves as lucky I don't throw you in the street. Now go away, don't bother me next time the jackals feed"
The wounded turned and walked away wondering if the price they'd pay was worth the fight to claim their rights and honor that was stripped that day
They gathered all the records and formed a choir of thought to prove that they were victims of an inside job
Their voices sang in harmony to a council of antipathy who shunned the bad publicity and with no apology won back their rights to live their lives with heads held high in dignity...
with no keeper and assurance the jackals would no longer feed
powerful write of the abused an abuser ... it's nice to see how when the "underprivileged" join forces they can overcome the obstacles of the power mongers, landlords, carpet baggers and monetary elite ...
Great write and a strong statement on the way the rights of the little guy are being trampled more and more but also showing in unity their is still strength.
I THOUGHT THAT I WAS AT THE MOVIES READING THIS ONE. THANKS.
Reviewed by LadyJtalks LadyJzTalkZone (Reader)
Reviewed on May 16, 2007
Good for them and good for you for the write. It is amazing how far the sceme flows when it can be delegated to some obscure part of the press as not to be noticed. Thank you for writing this. I try to keep my news flashes from the most reliable source I know, authors on the den. See with out being here i'd could almost be oblivious to the real world. Here I can find not only news, I can find the heart and passion of thoughts. Lady J
Great work my Cuddles!!!!!
It's amazing how forcefully and yet subtly you present your message. You have a strong sense of justice and I admire how you boldly take a stand against injustice in any form. You are a champion for those who do not have a voice and / or those who have had their voices silenced. Thank you for having the guts to do so. I love you!
Snuggles xxx
I most be one of the obtuses ones, because I didn't believed before as I don't believe now that "our system works"
We are more into the rights of the offender than on the rights of the victims.
As the poem pointed out "they were all victims of an inside job" and the GOP's response? "our system works"
Georg
Brett
Fee
powerful poem, but you did!
Love,
Eileen
It's amazing how forcefully and yet subtly you present your message. You have a strong sense of justice and I admire how you boldly take a stand against injustice in any form. You are a champion for those who do not have a voice and / or those who have had their voices silenced. Thank you for having the guts to do so. I love you!
Snuggles xxx
We are more into the rights of the offender than on the rights of the victims.
As the poem pointed out "they were all victims of an inside job" and the GOP's response? "our system works"
Georg