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Inside Job
by Edwin Larson → (All Poetry by Edwin Larson)
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Inspired by some newsworthy housing issues involving corruption in Downtown L.A. that for some reason aren't getting any Press...it may also have a broader relevance to various consumer-rights related issues.




The keeper of the gate was only half-awake
while guards played cards in leotards
with someone on the take

He gave away the keys and turned the other way
as jackals scurried by his post
chasing down their prey

After their first feeding they greased his dirty hand
He smiled through his blind eyes
and asked them back again

When approached by bloody victims
with indifference he replied
"It's all your fault just being here
so don't come back inside"

"Y'see the jackals are my friends
they helped build this gate
I don't give a damn about you
or what you have to say
You're just a paying tenant
and there's many more like you.
I'll piss on you and your's
It's the best that I can do.
So count yourselves as lucky
I don't throw you in the street.
Now go away, don't bother me
next time the jackals feed"

The wounded turned and walked away
wondering if the price they'd pay
was worth the fight to claim their rights 
and honor that was stripped that day

They gathered all the records
and formed a choir of thought
to prove that they were victims
of an inside job

Their voices sang in harmony
to a council of antipathy
who shunned the bad publicity
and with no apology
won back their rights
to live their lives
with heads held high
in dignity...

with no keeper and assurance 
the jackals
would no longer feed    
     
                 

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 Reviews of "Inside Job"
Reviewed by Brett Moore
Reviewed on May 20, 2007
Very good. I love the use of the imagery of jackals which is really effective.

Brett

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on May 16, 2007
powerful write of the abused an abuser ... it's nice to see how when the "underprivileged" join forces they can overcome the obstacles of the power mongers, landlords, carpet baggers and monetary elite ...

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on May 16, 2007
Great write and a strong statement on the way the rights of the little guy are being trampled more and more but also showing in unity their is still strength.

Fee

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on May 16, 2007
Fantastic write Edwin. Don't know how you made it into a
powerful poem, but you did!

Love,
Eileen

Reviewed on May 16, 2007
I THOUGHT THAT I WAS AT THE MOVIES READING THIS ONE. THANKS.

Reviewed by LadyJtalks LadyJzTalkZone (Reader)
Reviewed on May 16, 2007
Good for them and good for you for the write. It is amazing how far the sceme flows when it can be delegated to some obscure part of the press as not to be noticed. Thank you for writing this. I try to keep my news flashes from the most reliable source I know, authors on the den. See with out being here i'd could almost be oblivious to the real world. Here I can find not only news, I can find the heart and passion of thoughts. Lady J

Reviewed by Chanti Niven
Reviewed on May 16, 2007
Great work my Cuddles!!!!!
It's amazing how forcefully and yet subtly you present your message. You have a strong sense of justice and I admire how you boldly take a stand against injustice in any form. You are a champion for those who do not have a voice and / or those who have had their voices silenced. Thank you for having the guts to do so. I love you!
Snuggles xxx

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on May 16, 2007
I most be one of the obtuses ones, because I didn't believed before as I don't believe now that "our system works"
We are more into the rights of the offender than on the rights of the victims.
As the poem pointed out "they were all victims of an inside job" and the GOP's response? "our system works"
Georg

Reviewed by Larry Lounsbury
Reviewed on May 15, 2007
This is a great example of people fighting back against a system that has gotten out of hand.excellent


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