after the fire burns the embers
in the still of the night where only snores of bed partners are shared, a hand reaches out to touch warm skin, the same skin that has shared covers for forty years, warm, soft and comforting to the worst nightmares life has offered, sighs and a movement…bodies like magnets come together, not for sex or pleasures of the flesh but for warmth of the heart and serenity of the soul, the years have added the rolls and the lines and the gray hair or receding hair but in the night, in the silent night it does not matter, like silver spoons nestled in a velvet lined drawer they lay fitting perfectly till daylight releases them to their purpose in this world, mother, father, nanny, poppy, uncle, aunt and best friends to each other…
I love the feelings that immenet from it!
I am so looking forward to it all and more!
Great idea you had!
Wonderful pen touches many hearts!
PEACE & WArm HuGs, WArrior Lady Sheeeoox
Wonderful touch!
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the years have added the rolls and the lines and the gray hair or receding hair but in the night, in the silent night it does not matter, like silver spoons nestled in a velvet lined drawer they lay fitting perfectly till daylight releases -ETc
like silver spoons nestled in a velvet lined drawer they lay fitting perfectly <---- What a marvelous vision this verse leaves me with!!
Karen
those are the millionairs in life lol
pax A
Regis
Myrna
this one is a keeper
love and peace,
Carole~
This is longevity love you are speaking about in your poem!
I hope my husband and I have that type of Love Wow,
your words are like a waltz I can picture in my mind
The rolls,the fine lines,and gray hair
This is a great masterpiece my friend and I love it!!
Love And Peace..Morning Star
Top of the class for this mate.
Love Ch'erie
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in tx., karen lynn. :D
For some, the fire never wanes. :) This is a most beautiful testament to true love. Well done, my (((friend)))
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Love Tinka
"after the fire burns the embers"
Ahhh, so beautiful and reassuring...enjoyed this work immensely and all that it engulfs...all is my favorite, however my most favorite is the below lines...pure poetic romance!
"like silver spoons nestled in a velvet lined drawer they lay fitting perfectly" Could not have been written any better~Just loved it Felix~thanks
Sincerely,
~From the Heart...
ps...velvety red that is~;)
beautiful wording ...yep, like Mitzi says ...thats how its supposed to be
that is how it is suppose to be
pure love done to perfection here!!
Hugs, Laura
A wonderfully tender expression, befitting genuine and committed love.
I appreciate this, Fee...
Love&Blessings, Rhonda
Love your Cuz, Rose XOXO
Excellent write,
Michael