WOW! this poem is AWESOME Sweet Fee!
Pain, dedgrigation and cheat/etc, all
in a poetic tight pkg.
Love the 1,2,3 word style :)
WArm Hugs and love, Warrior Purple Sheeeoox
YOu and yours,
STay Positive!
STay SAFE!
Fee,
This is a strong poem that I, as well as many others, have experienced in life. The only thing we can do is to pull ourselves up from the floor, dust our knees and go again when sadness strikes.
Great work!
Ah Dear Felix, I know that promises are broken on a daily routine, and passion do croak, hearts are sadly tormented and tears are shed. But through it all life must go on. I too have seen that empty room time and time again.
Thank you for sharing your words.
This is a haunting piece that
Expresses a sad, sad story. I
Have to think on it for
A brief moment...which is
Good.Excellent write!!
Love Peace and Joy many Hugssss to you...Yolie
Reviewed by LadyJtalks LadyJzTalkZone (Reader)
Reviewed on July 12, 2007
Silence is a cold dark place when there is so much passion in life to be had. Nice write to reflect on. Lady J
You know that I love short verse and these recent poems of yours with the short lines really grab me! But of course, I love all of your works...I'm partial. :) Great job, Felix!
I'm not, for the most part, a fan of end-rhyme poetry preferring free verse with internal rhyme and meter instead, but with this particular one you've changed my mind. It's an exceptional poem dear Fee and a lot of work went into it which is obvious. WELL DONE - I APPLAUD YOU!
I met Jerome on a busy city street in Baltimore, Maryland, when he was forty-five years old. On that particular day, I was out and about, enjoying a much-needed day off from work.
I wanted to purchase a sukiyaki sub. I parked my car in an area of
Pain, dedgrigation and cheat/etc, all
in a poetic tight pkg.
Love the 1,2,3 word style :)
WArm Hugs and love, Warrior Purple Sheeeoox
YOu and yours,
STay Positive!
STay SAFE!
Write on, Fee!
Jules :)
George
Love & hugs
Walt
Love Tinka
This is a strong poem that I, as well as many others, have experienced in life. The only thing we can do is to pull ourselves up from the floor, dust our knees and go again when sadness strikes.
Great work!
Jill
Another awesome poem from you written straight from your kind heart. I agree with Rose, life must go on even through sadness.
Hugggs,
~Linda
Thank you for sharing your words.
Love ya Cuz XOXO
Expresses a sad, sad story. I
Have to think on it for
A brief moment...which is
Good.Excellent write!!
Love Peace and Joy many Hugssss to you...Yolie
Lusts is the cheater. No one wins in passion over time when lust is short lived. Lusts is gone without a thought and emptied of value.
love,
Susan
Thanks,
Dan
Susan
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.