Memories For Sale (poem) by Felix LeRoy Perry on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on January 15, 2008

Sad and sweet. Beautifully done.

Reviewed on January 11, 2008

Sad and so full of emotion...but some memories are like that, aren't they?

Reviewed on January 11, 2008

Fee,

This poem yanks on the heartstrings. Memories can hurt just as easily as they make us smile. Beautiful work on this one!
Sheila

Reviewed by Rebekah Rosie Lang

Reviewed on January 10, 2008

Beautiful poem, Fee. Makes everyone think I would hope!
Emotion is shown very well too. I was rivoted. Good
rhyming also.
Becca (BB) Lang

Reviewed by Sheri Uy

Reviewed on January 8, 2008

Oh, this one is so sad, Fee. Written with a lot of emotion and i'm sure, the pain of remembering. Filled with so much longing and remorse. Very nostalgic. Thank you for sharing it.

Be well, my friend.
Sheri

Reviewed by Rebecca Lerwill

Reviewed on January 8, 2008

Painful, sad, longing, knowing the past won't return - no matter what!
Sometimes memories just SUCK!
Thanks for sharing, Fee. This one lingers.
Love,
Bec~

Reviewed by Rose Rideout

Reviewed on January 8, 2008

Felix, Felix what are you doing to me,you know what I am like for tears and you write something like this. Very sad yet beautifully written dear Cuz, your words are tearing at my heart. Thank you for sharing.

Love ya face Cuz XOXOXO, Rose

Reviewed by Selena Dobbin-Gillis

Reviewed on January 8, 2008

Such a sad and emotional write dear cuz, but you have a way with Moving us with your words. And yes the teddy gave it that extra touch darlin. Keep it coming sweet cuz.

Love to you,
Selena

Reviewed by Ch'erie de Perrot

Reviewed on January 8, 2008

Oh Teddy looks so sad, he is truly betwixt and between...
Ah such a tender moving write, it sure pays to seize the moment.
Hugszzzzz Cherrypie

Reviewed by Christine Alwin

Reviewed on January 7, 2008

very moving write,,, memories, pain and hurt, it would be nice if we could sell some of life's memories.
Always, Christine

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on January 7, 2008

a very sad, moving poem offering sentiments and emotions that only memories can rekindle ...

Reviewed by LadyJtalks LadyJzTalkZone (Reader)

Reviewed on January 7, 2008

Great write, you did it proud...Lady J

Reviewed by Kathy Armijo

Reviewed on January 7, 2008

This poem wrecks havoc in my heart. Often the choices we make seem like exactly the "right" ones, but then tomorrow comes and ... Monday morning quarterback syndrome. I believe, hurts are there as a beacon.

Be well...........love, Kathy

Reviewed by Joyce Bowling

Reviewed on January 7, 2008

An emotional write...very touching and heartfelt...lingers on one's thoughts, the picture is perfect for this poem. Well done!
Blessings,
Joyce B.

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter

Reviewed on January 7, 2008

We make decisions never knowing what will be down the road. The scars are there and the guilt but the heart still will always beat true for the loss.
Love,
Susan

Reviewed by Sanja Dayslink (Reader)

Reviewed on January 7, 2008

What a perfect pic to go with your heartfelt memories...well done, Fee.

Reviewed by Connie Faust

Reviewed on January 7, 2008

Did you HAVE TO put an old teddy bear on? I usually read the poem first, then scroll back up to see the picture and take in the meaning of it all.
This poem, with its heart-wrenching memories, is so moving, but the sight of the bear puts an aching exclamation point on it all!
If this is really your personal memory, God bless you and give His peace. We all have regrets. Hopefully, it is your empathetic poet's heart feeling the pain for someone else's memories.

Connie

Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*� (Reader)

Reviewed on January 7, 2008

Isn't it the truth, Fee? Sentimental value can be more precious than gold.

Love & Light always and in all ways,
Joseph*

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart

Reviewed on January 7, 2008

So bittersweet and real Fee.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on January 7, 2008

This is so very sad.....I have a snotty nose already........now you made it more snotty!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Carole Mathys

Reviewed on January 7, 2008

How sad it is when the wrong choices are made...

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on January 7, 2008

So very, very sad.

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on January 7, 2008

Your feelings of loss tear at ones heart and we can only pray that you will find that peace of mind that eludes you now.

Reviewed by Staci Gansky-Wagner

Reviewed on January 7, 2008

So very sad--life has many twists and turns.

Reviewed by RaeLynn Teller

Reviewed on January 7, 2008

You brought this nightmare with you to paper. Now I'm never going to get some sleep.
Truly, though, it has a great twist. Not at all where my mind was going. And the layout literally had me reading to the cadence of my breaths.
You guided not only my mind but my very body on this piece.
Sweets--RaeLynn

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on January 7, 2008

(((Fee))),

This one hurts: what might have been. Sad reality for far too many. Poignancy, well penned. :(

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

Reviewed on January 7, 2008

wow!a really stirring write-so very sad

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on January 7, 2008

Heartwrenching poem, Fee; very well and powerfully penned! BRAVO!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :( >tears! <

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on January 7, 2008

I wrote once, "if you don't want to cry...you shouldn't remember" but if you must, be selective, remember the lovely and tender moments, only.
Georg

Reviewed by Paul Berube

Reviewed on January 7, 2008

Fee,

Beautiful poem my friend. I'd dare not sell memories such as that for the world. They should be enshrined. Peace, Love and Blessings Always, Paul.

Our faded picture�in a dusty frame

A box full of dishes�pink rose design