Too Close To A Flame
By : Fee
Hearts mislead, minds deceive
Communications lonely call
Teardrops concealed
The hidden revealed
Not always how we planned
First a tingle, as we mingle
Little desires flare again
Fan a little spark
In a place so dark
But then burned by a flame
I said this and you said that
Wishes in the morning sun
Fell way too far
Like a falling star
Now I’ll repack the ray oh hope
Moments past, not meant to last
Just craving for a touch
From passion denied
To myself I lied
Perhaps meant to be alone…
Thank you for sharing.
Sincerely,
~Gwendolyn
Love Tinka
Sanja xo
Sandy
Romantics do thrive on the highs of love but are cursed to feel the lows just as deeply. A beautiful poem to express the romantic's heart!
Sheila
emotionally compelling poem, Felix ...
Don't look back just glance over your shoulder once in a while to remember where you might have gone awry...:0
You fired me up! And I'm pondering again...
Love and Peace~
Kimmy~
A very sad poem.
Georg
I'd rather be a shallow stinking wretch with no feeling for anyone but myself for a change, sht it would hurt less.
Hugz all the same
Cherry Pie
Allen
"Words instead the sweet sensation
I gather from a lover’s touch,
yearning more of your creations
passionly your dreams I clutch."
Love You Fee!!!
xox :-D
so true. Such is life and love.
Or this write
wouldn't of met your quill!
Love and WArm BiG hugs, Warrior Purple Lady Sweet Sheooxoo
STay Positive!
Awesome transference of thought poem! I want your heart FULL of deep beating thumping LOVE! Wish it on your favorite STAR and it won't be far! ;)
Write On!
Write, Write, WRite, get it all outtttttt! :)
Such as these could ever be meant to
Be alone Fee
Your chosen words Sparks the fire of your
Passionate heart
Beautifully written and expressed Yearnings!!
Peace Love and hugssss to you....Morning Star
Beautiful expression from a longing Muse. Well done.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Love,
Susan
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
Love ya face Cuz XOXO, Rose