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Love at First Sigh
by Felix LeRoy Perry → (All Poetry by Felix LeRoy Perry)
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Slow country song...probably in Key of G,4/4, still working on it but thought I'd see if any suggestions...

Love at First Sigh (song)

By: Fee

 

Chorus: Little red hearts and daggered darts

             Initials scratched, on old tree bark

            Goodnight kisses and sweet dream wishes

           Stolen memories made in the dark

 

Some people say love’s at first sight

Well now I’m sure…that they are right

I saw you smile and my heart ached

And I knew I was too weak to fight

 

Love poems written in a dreamy state

Nothing is for sure all is left to fate

I’d give my heart and I’d trade my soul

For just one chance to make us whole

 

Chorus

 

Mistletoe nights and romantic lights

Snowed in lovin’ on a stormy night

Giggles and wiggles and wake up tickles

Make up sex over some silly fight

 

As this world turns I’m hanging on

Whistling a tune and singing along

But if I lost you then I’d just fall

For you are why I sing my song

 

Chorus and fade

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 


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 Reviews of "Love at First Sigh"
Reviewed by Kathleen McDonald
Reviewed on October 19, 2008
A Fee!!! a song writer too. Wow!!! this is great. loved it.
hugs
Kathy

Reviewed by Denise Edwards
Reviewed on October 3, 2008
She's sos lucky who ever she is, to have your heart, because it's pouring out wonderfully romantic songs! So very romantic!

Warm hugs~~~Dee

Reviewed by Sheila Roy
Reviewed on October 2, 2008
Lovely! Hugs to you,
Sheila

Reviewed by Elizabeth Price
Reviewed on October 2, 2008
Excellent. Liz

Reviewed by Liana Margiva
Reviewed on October 2, 2008
Sweet and romantic, beautiful words!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
Reviewed on October 1, 2008
Would love to hear you sing it!

Reviewed by Morning Star
Reviewed on October 1, 2008
Woow I could hear the lyrics with some string guitar

I saw you smile and my heart ached

And I knew I was too weak to fight

Its perfect for a country song!!

LOVE IT!!!

Peace Love and Light......Morning Star

Reviewed by Michelle Mead
Reviewed on October 1, 2008
I could just hear this sung! I really love the chorus, it definately has that great country feel to it. I love all of it, but the mistletoe stanza is wonderful :)

Reviewed by Mary Coe
Reviewed on October 1, 2008
Very, very, nice!

Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on October 1, 2008
...this is just yummy... what a sweet song,,,you really need to send them to recording artist's!

Reviewed by Tonya I
Reviewed on October 1, 2008
Very, very, very sweet!!! Loved it :)

Reviewed on October 1, 2008
Great country lyrics; shades of Grand Ole Opry all over the sucker! Well done, Fee!!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson
Reviewed on October 1, 2008
Dang! I really like this stanza:

"Mistletoe nights and romantic lights
Snowed in lovin’ on a stormy night
Giggles and wiggles and wake up tickles
Make up sex over some silly fight"

Oh yeah!

Reviewed by Carole Mathys
Reviewed on October 1, 2008
Awesome Fee...

Carole~

Reviewed by Southern Comfort
Reviewed on October 1, 2008
Just PURRRRRFECT! HUGS! SC

Reviewed on October 1, 2008
Aww, this is beautifully penned. Well done.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on October 1, 2008
Looks good to me my friend. Well done.

Reviewed by Rose Rideout
Reviewed on October 1, 2008
Wow Cuz you are on fire with this one. I love it. Thank yo for sharing makes me feel as though there is magic in the air.

Love ya face Cuz XOXOXO, Rose

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on October 1, 2008
Next to last line "but if I lost you my heart would ache" Sounds great to me either way.

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on October 1, 2008
Don't listen to PeeWee, to me it would be in soft tones, like Leonard Cohen's, and yes fading softly away at the final, like a promise of returning.

Georg

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on October 1, 2008
Sure sounds like a fine country song to me, Fee.

Reviewed by Susan Sonnen
Reviewed on October 1, 2008
I love it when you post your songs, Felix. This one is so lovely.

My favorite verse:

Mistletoe nights and romantic lights

Snowed in lovin’ on a stormy night

Giggles and wiggles and wake up tickles

Make up sex over some silly fight

And with the mention of mistletoe you have me aching for Christmas!

Reviewed on October 1, 2008
Fee this is a great song, I hope you are taking steps to have your songs published and promoted to the right people.


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