razor sharp incision (poem) by Felix LeRoy Perry on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on October 14, 2008

Fee I see that you have Halloween on your mind. I like Haloween too. So much to write about. I like this dark write as I always like doing them myself. It is a chance to let go .
hugs
Kathy

Reviewed by Denise Edwards

Reviewed on October 13, 2008

I love the way your mind jumps around, because it's always so creating, weaving and spinning wonderful webs to snag our attention! This is very creative.

Reviewed by Michelle Mead

Reviewed on October 12, 2008

This is really tightly written, i really love the first to last stanza, great imagery. Your work is amazing of late, keep it up :) Michelle

Reviewed by Sheila Roy

Reviewed on October 11, 2008

I'm the same way, Fee - my mind jumps from one topic to the next. It's more fun that way. I like this leap of yours to the dark side. That's twice already this month. Keep exploring! Hugs:)
Sheila

Reviewed by Sara Coslett

Reviewed on October 10, 2008

I don't know, Fee, but this one speaks to me tonight. My mind and soul has been incised and left bleeding. When I thought it was apparent I was in pain, the knife came again. Maybe it's the period, maybe it's globalization. I don't know, but this poem spoke to me. ~ sara

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on October 10, 2008

surgically contoured poem, Felix ... i do enjoy your poems combining mind, heart and the world of speculation and possibility ...

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM

Reviewed on October 10, 2008

If you gotta write a downer, you might as well get it all out at once, Felix. This poem is like a tumbling wall of all the heartaches of a lifetime...each brick, a memory we stashed away hoping to never see again. When it rains, it pours and the best we can hope for is a good cleansing when it is through or perhaps a rainbow. Good job, Felix.
Take care,
Sherry
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo

Reviewed on October 10, 2008

There is sadness, almost to the point of dispair in this piece, but in these troubles times it is no wonder. Facing such uncertainty, the likes we have not experienced before can keep one awake at night, walking, pacing the floors....

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Dale Clark

Reviewed on October 10, 2008

The last stanza says it all, Fee! Great write!

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on October 10, 2008

Very good write, Fee; bravo!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D

LOL at Georg the Impaler below!! LOLOLOL

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on October 10, 2008

Where in hell you find the key to my dungeons door?

Georg "the impaler"

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on October 10, 2008

This one keenly felt - well done, Fee!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson

Reviewed on October 10, 2008

This is so well and painfully written.

Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson

Reviewed on October 10, 2008

"razor sharp incision
blood-letting pain"

Incision? Blood? Did you say blood letting? Oh my! I'll see you at the Halloween party. lol!

Reviewed by Christine Alwin

Reviewed on October 10, 2008

...I can see you shaving as your mind is oh so far away...yes our cuts and bruised hearts heal in time...you took the wind out of me as I read this outstanding poem.... a masterpiece really.
Love,Christine

Reviewed by Ch'erie de Perrot

Reviewed on October 10, 2008

Did you cut your face shaving Fee??

Just kidding, i hear some built up pain frustration here. Big arms, extending across the atlantic..Hugzzz Cherrypie

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

Reviewed on October 10, 2008

i enjoyed this--your words express so much emotion and feeling

Reviewed by Susan Sonnen

Reviewed on October 10, 2008

Felix, this is fabulous!

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on October 10, 2008

Even the moon has its dark side.

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on October 10, 2008

Quite a painful write, Mr. Romance, Freaky, Santa, Fee.

Reviewed by Bonnie May

Reviewed on October 10, 2008

Holy Cow Fee, how deep dig you dig, this sounds very painful. A love I don't think I'd persue for it hurts a little too much for me. Wow, this was one amazing write, one I soon won't forget. Love, Bonnie

Reviewed by Rose Rideout

Reviewed on October 10, 2008

Wow Felix, this one you dug deep for.
Almost makes me want to cry. Although
another excellent write.

Love ya face Cuz XOXOXO, Rose