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Dear John Message
by Felix LeRoy Perry → (All Poetry by Felix LeRoy Perry)
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This is not a personal experience but I was just thinking with so many people using messangers and text messages etc, how easy it would be if someone were cheating to get messages crossed and so this is how I perceived it...

Dear John Message

By: Fee

 

 

I got the message that you texted me today

When I read it I didn’t know what to say

Because you called me by another’s name

I wish I’d never read the words I read today

 

I read the first line that asked if I were there

Went on to read about how much you care

Then what I read tore my whole world apart

Words not meant for me that much was clear

 

I guess he messaged you the same time as I

And somehow you mixed up your reply

“I love you” written before someone else’s name

I kept reading it and kept asking myself why

 

Now I’m deleting all that’s left of me and you

I’ll consign it to a box words that are not true

I’ll wipe my tear on a printout of the words

That you wrote to someone else my “I love you.”

 


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 Reviews of "Dear John Message"
Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on October 26, 2008
....Ouch

Reviewed by Michelle Mead
Reviewed on October 21, 2008
Yes, if someone did actually do this, and were that unsure of their feelings, I suppose they would deserve this to happen to them- that is, if the person doing the judging hadn't misread or misconstrued what was typed, otherwise, it would cause needless broken hearts.

Reviewed by Rebecca Lerwill
Reviewed on October 20, 2008
oopps. I wonder how many people really 'screw' up like that. Cheaters should get caught. If it's because they're stupit, that's even better.
Love,
Becca~

Reviewed by S Phillips
Reviewed on October 19, 2008
Yikes. I've wondered what would happen with crossed messages. So many people having superficial relationships too via texting, then things get out of control, mixed messages. Ah, I just love being older. I don't "text" beyond the written word here. cheers.

Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg
Reviewed on October 19, 2008
well thought out expression of an undesireable experience...

Reviewed by Sheila Roy
Reviewed on October 19, 2008
Fee,
This is an easy mistake to make. Twice now, I've sent a message to my sister that was meant for my hubby. Thankfully, it was nothing bad. We all had a laugh over it. I felt the guy's anguish when he read words not meant for him. Great job!
Sheila

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on October 19, 2008
Life has become pretty scary with all the mess and muddles we can get ourselves into. Plus the potential for messages to be misread is another major danger of the whole system. Time was we all had one mailbox, one phone and everyone interconnected knew who was communicating to whom. Life has exploded for both better and worse and I doubt any one of us would choose to go back to a "simpler" way, given the new freedoms we have to expand our respective worlds. But ah me, so too are the potentials for pain and suffering immense when things go wrong or are taken wrongly. A good write about a modern day health hazard. :)) xx

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on October 19, 2008
a very unfortunate scenario ... in this age of email & IMs is best to know where your feelings are going before they get there ...

Reviewed by Linda Hill
Reviewed on October 19, 2008
Fee,
Somewhere in the world I'm sure this has happened. So sad, but could be so true for some unlucky soul out there. Excellent and preceptive write, my friend.

Many blessings,
~Linda

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
Reviewed on October 19, 2008
Sad, but true to the times. You wrote this one well. Fee.

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on October 19, 2008
You know those little square yellow self-adesive notes? be luccky is one morning you find one of those on the refrigerator door, no breakfast ready and she gone.
E-mail? why bother, the schmuck will get the message loud and clear.

Georg


Reviewed by Kathleen McDonald
Reviewed on October 18, 2008
I liked this write very much Fee. How easy it is for this to happen in text messages and what a cruel thing to happen to anyone. Well done Fee as always.
hugs
kathy

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
Reviewed on October 18, 2008
yes, dating, and romance is becoming so non-personal. It is a sad state of affairs....
Great write Fee, as always, you never disappoint your readers.
Peace, love, and light,

Amber "V"

Reviewed by Elizabeth Price
Reviewed on October 18, 2008
Text messaging a "Dear John Message" is cold. Sad. Great write. Liz

Reviewed by Sara Coslett
Reviewed on October 18, 2008
It isn't a good way to let the other person know you are going around with another person behind their back. I guess there aren't any good ways, but this is a very hurtful thing. ~ Sara

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on October 18, 2008
sad--we should be so careful with one another's hearts

Reviewed by Rose Rideout
Reviewed on October 18, 2008
Sad one Fee I am glad this is not from a personal experience. A great write, I pray this never happens to me. Thank you for sharing.

Newfie Hugs. Rose

Reviewed by Southern Comfort
Reviewed on October 18, 2008
New fangled ways to cheat, betray and put an innocent party in a world of pain. This is another gem from the Poetry Man! HUGS! SC

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on October 18, 2008
If someone stays true, there is no need to worry about the sort of problem that could happen herein...ed

Reviewed on October 18, 2008
Sad one today, Fee, but excellently penned! BRAVO!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :(

Reviewed on October 18, 2008
Ah, this one is relevant in today's society: with the advent of technology, we can hide behind a screen or phone and not communicate face to face anymore...sad. Very well penned, Fee.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed on October 18, 2008
Felix,

E-mail is an odd thing. You've shown by example in your poem. It can make you laugh, cry, angry, plus meet new friends, and much more. As in your poem, sometimes it breaks your heart.

Mary

Reviewed on October 18, 2008
It's always best to IM with one person at a time thats for sure. We wouldn't dream of talkin g on the phone to several people at one time unless it was a confrence call. But yes indeed the status of anonimity on the net comes in many forms, from the who, when, where & wt-? lol...and yes even in the intentions of love, and it's real enough to feel love...therefore real enough to hurt too...

Peace, Love & Poetry
Embraced ~ Embrassé
Vickie

Reviewed by Denise Edwards
Reviewed on October 18, 2008
This really can happen. I sent some pics to a friend, but they went to someone else because I hit send on the wrong name! Like Bonnie said, how cruel if this happens, to find out about cheating over a text msg. Very powerful write, Fee

Reviewed by Bonnie May
Reviewed on October 18, 2008
OHHHHHHH how cruel. Everyone deserves their own dear John Letter. I'd call her and tell her to send you the right one after all fair is fair. Great thought! Love, Bonnie


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