the bard's final church service (poem) by Felix LeRoy Perry on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on February 21, 2009

You sound like a pirate here. I really enjoyed the style of this write. So nicely done Fee
hugs
Kathy

Reviewed on February 21, 2009

Fee,
I love the classic tone here. Bravo:) A masterpiece! Love and Hugs,
Sheila

Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G

Reviewed on February 19, 2009

This is such an EXCELLENT dark poem SWEET FEE!
I enjoyed reading it twice
your heart was truly in flight....
Such emotive expressions found deeply hidden!Love the picture that spewed these words on too!
"The Bards Final Church Service" is truly remarkable! As you continue looking forward...Even in the eerie walls of time...

Warmest of Blessings and Inner Peace, Warrior Purple Passion Lady SHEExooo

Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse

Reviewed on February 17, 2009

AWE....SOME!!!
love these taunting webs hidden in the corners of your pen Fee!!!
I Am A Lover Of These Types Of Poems As You Know
So....Down further we venture upon each stair step leading us with your wonderful verses into those darkled halls of "the bard's final church service"

Much Love & Inspirations
Vickie

Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg

Reviewed on February 16, 2009

cool...like the style

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on February 16, 2009

Outstanding Felix
Sounds like witches prayer....lol
Peace be with you

William

Reviewed by Dale Clark

Reviewed on February 16, 2009

Very nice, Fee, great tribute to the bard

Reviewed by Rose Rideout

Reviewed on February 16, 2009

What an imagination you have Cuz, if only I could write like you. This is great. Thank you for sharing.

Love ya face Cuz XOXOXO, Rose

Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle

Reviewed on February 16, 2009

Powerful and excellent poem,very intriguing,take care

Edwin

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on February 16, 2009

Quite powerful, and quite a powerful graphic, my friend.

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on February 16, 2009

Oh Yorik! if you could talk...heck! ! ! I prefer you don't!
Nice done Fee.

Georg

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson

Reviewed on February 16, 2009

I love the "feel" of the verse...and the photo suits it perfectly!

Reviewed by Walt Hardester

Reviewed on February 15, 2009

Fee this has the hint of the Bard himself.
The flow sets the erie mood with well chosen wording.
Great thought in this one methinks.
Beware the Ides.........

Walt

Reviewed by J'nia Fowler

Reviewed on February 15, 2009

your pentameter rings loudly of the famous bard of old. Excellent. J'nia

Reviewed by Elizabeth Russo

Reviewed on February 15, 2009

The Bard would be proud, Fee ... each word carefully chosen for full effectiveness in painting this dark portrait of "the end". Perfect language ... the grim, deathly emotion is palpable. Super write! Hugs, Lizzie

Reviewed by Michelle Mead

Reviewed on February 15, 2009

Yes, i can feel a classically gothic mood to this that matches well the picture. I am always impressed by the way you can write whatever style you wish to, really really well. :) Michelle

Reviewed by Elizabeth Price

Reviewed on February 15, 2009

Brilliant. Beyond brilliant. And creepy too. Love it. Liz

Reviewed by Bernice Angoh

Reviewed on February 15, 2009

EEEEEEEEERRRIE!!!

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on February 15, 2009

Splendid as is your forte for the dark side.

Reviewed by Linda Law

Reviewed on February 15, 2009

Altho I generally avoid dark topics, (just a personal thing/reasons) I do enjoy good writing! You my friend, have a way with words, and storytelling... good write. hugs, lindalaw

Reviewed by Carole Mathys

Reviewed on February 15, 2009

I so enjoy the way you write Fee, even your darker ones.
good job

Carole~

Reviewed by Rebecca Lerwill

Reviewed on February 15, 2009

That's very stark, my friend. I do like it, reminds me of Stephen King. I also like the font. I'm not sure if you used this one before. Great job! Missed ya.
Love,
Becca~

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on February 15, 2009

Hauntingly penned, Fee, my favorite line is,

"...lay dormant the beads of mother's rosary
worn smooth from prayers forgot...." WOW Powerful! Heartbreaking!

Well done.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :(

Reviewed by Bonnie May

Reviewed on February 15, 2009

FASINATING WRITE FEE....A TRUE GEM...I AGREE, BETTER THAN SHAKESPEARE FOR I COULD SEE IT IN THIS WRITE BUT NEVER COULD IN HIS...LOVE AND HUGS, BONNIE

Reviewed by Flying Fox Ted L Glines (Reader)

Reviewed on February 15, 2009

I cannot say why, but I LOVE that title, Fee. And the poem? This is better than Shakespeare or Dante or Petrarch. By comparison, their lines and images were stilted and somehow out of reach, while your verse easily reaches me, right now, today. This one is so excellent Fee. Marcia will love it, and you might send her the pic, as well.

Ted

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

Reviewed on February 15, 2009

i love the atmosphere and feel to this--perfect word choices

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone

Reviewed on February 15, 2009

This poem has such a goth feel to it. But deeply interwoven is a lost soul fearful of what is coming. Needing spring to bloom in his heart to feel alive once again.
Just what I was feeling from this poem.
Very deeply written and the picture that inspired this poem is quite amazing!
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on February 15, 2009

Weird thoughts on a Sunday morn...hope you went to church and to God confessed your sins...e ;-)

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on February 15, 2009

We'll never know where our muse gets its inspirations from, but this is a good one. EXCELLENT write, Fee!!!

Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed by Connie Faust

Reviewed on February 15, 2009

Total gloom, remorse and bitterness of soul... now I need to read something UPlifting. Still, the work itself is enviably expressed with fascinating word pictures. Poor vacant skull, did you not know there was hope offered freely in Jesus?
Connie