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A Passionate Ache
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Just feeling an old ache revisited...

A Passionate Ache

By: Felix L. Perry

Just an ache that…

 

Starts as insecurity

Twinges

Spreads from heart

Pain

To a lump in throat

Swollen

Moves on to eyes

Teardrops

Clouds the brain

Dead stop

Paralysis of thought

Confusion

 

 

Alone, empty, adrift

Sadness, hurt, fear

Anger, confusion…ache

 

 


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 Reviews of "A Passionate Ache"
Reviewed by Kathleen McDonald
Reviewed on May 14, 2009
very potent work. you have described ache so well.

hugs
kAT

Reviewed by Mary Coe
Reviewed on May 10, 2009
Powerful and strong. A very good write that we can all relate to.

Reviewed by Bernice Angoh
Reviewed on May 9, 2009
Beautiful sadness, only made beautiful by your words

Reviewed by Jon Willey
Reviewed on May 9, 2009
Felix, your verbalization poetically captures that "ache" that we have all experienced at one time or another -- peace and love -- Jon Michael

Reviewed by Sheila Roy
Reviewed on May 9, 2009
Remarkable word choices make us feel these raw emotions. Well done, Fee. Cheer up:)
Sheila

Reviewed by J'nia Fowler
Reviewed on May 8, 2009
All seems to culminate and settle in the crevasses of the aching soul. Makes me feel sad. Hugs x 20, J'nia

Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on May 8, 2009
You would hope a good massage would heal such an ache...but there are no quick cures for such pain....great write Fee.
Hugs,
Christine

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
Reviewed on May 8, 2009
And those old aches often seem to hurt us the most.

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce
Reviewed on May 7, 2009
Hi Fee:

I hope you will feel better soon. Sometimes, having a good cry might help to ease the pain of loss and emptiness as well.

Take care.

Hugs,

Sandie Angel :(

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on May 7, 2009
Wowwwwwwwwww..this is wonderful sweet Fee..I hope your heart shines today sweet man...keep smiling always OK...stay safe and well...Hugss

Reviewed by Rose Rideout
Reviewed on May 7, 2009
Felix this one hurts as I feel what you feel. I can't wait to move there where I am closer to you Cuz.

Love ya face Cuz XOXOXO, Rose

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on May 7, 2009
Those old aches are usually the worst. Hope much better feelings are on the horizon.

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on May 7, 2009
Probably one of your best collection of thoughts, feelings and inspiration put together.
Excellent poem!!!

Georg


Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on May 6, 2009
And to you, a long didtance hug--sounds like you could use one

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on May 6, 2009
Feelings we have all experienced at one time or another, all the more reason to focus on all the good you are surrounded with and count each blessing over and over again....

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed on May 6, 2009
Great write, Fee; well done!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :)

Reviewed by Ch'erie de Perrot
Reviewed on May 6, 2009
A different style of expression here Fee, I like it!!
As for the Ache, yeah...I know the one, it sucks :)
Hugzz Cherrypie

Reviewed by Linda Zebsokey
Reviewed on May 6, 2009
To experience the ache of painful emotions is as common to the human experience as breathing. To express such experiences is the vocation of the poet. Good job, Fee.

Reviewed by Denise Edwards
Reviewed on May 6, 2009
Very well description of anguish, Fee. I just hope this is your muse, and not personal dear friend

Reviewed on May 6, 2009
Hi Fee, an old ache revisited, indeed, for many as we read this... some of us still adrift... you always write with such clarity, even amidst the ache... they say, "this too shall pass" but they never said it would come back... who are they, anyways?

In Spirit,
Bear

Reviewed by J. Allen Wilson
Reviewed on May 6, 2009
Felix...you express this emotion well in this piece...

Allen

Reviewed by Michelle Mead
Reviewed on May 6, 2009
Hmmmm, it is funny how we perceive things sometimes, isn't it? Thanks for showing us this vulnerable side of yourself. It takes a strong man to do that, for sure.

Reviewed by Susan Sonnen
Reviewed on May 6, 2009
Ouch. I know this ache.

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on May 6, 2009
Hope even with all that, its a good ache...e


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