The Ghost of Three AM (poem) by Felix LeRoy Perry on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on June 12, 2009

Maybe you let your calling pass by Fee. I can hear this one being sung.

Love ya face Cuz XOXOXO, Rose

Reviewed on June 10, 2009

Beautiful Lyrics. Some friends of mine BLACKDOGHAT are musicians in England and I can definitely see this with music. They don't buy lyrics but you might consider it as a gift - I've done it and they make such touching melodies of my words. Tell them I sent you and let them have a look. Always, Teresa

Reviewed by L. Figgins

Reviewed on June 9, 2009

You may not have a tune yet, but I can hear one in my head. Wow, these are great lyrics! Look out B.B. Good one, Fee...

Lin

Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse

Reviewed on June 7, 2009

I agree with Melissa Kesead..this feels like a wonderful blues song
now we wonder...who is "The Ghost of Three AM" :)
Embraced~Embrass�
Vickie

Reviewed by Natasha Head (Reader)

Reviewed on June 5, 2009

FANTASTIC WRITE! The tune is obvious, the rythm strong. Goodness...who couldn't relate to a write such as this. Awesome! Loved it!

Reviewed by Melissa Kesead

Reviewed on June 4, 2009

Do you think you would put a blues feel to this? It sure feels bluesy to me and I can see someone tangled in their sheets from restless sleep thinking about that 3 a.m. woman.

Reviewed by Elizabeth Price

Reviewed on June 3, 2009

Brilliantly put together and very lyrical. Best thing I've every seen come out of 3 am in my dreams. I like sheila's review. Liz

Reviewed by kg cummings

Reviewed on June 3, 2009

Nothing like a 3 a.m. ghost to cause some night stirs! I could see the curtains blowing and hear the wind a whisperin'!!! Smiles, kathy

Reviewed by Sheila Roy

Reviewed on June 2, 2009

It's called the witching hour, and it definitely has you bewitched, Fee. Nicely done!
Sheila

Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg

Reviewed on June 2, 2009

haunting or romantic? seems your ghost is whispering in your music ear :)

Reviewed by Linda Zebsokey

Reviewed on June 2, 2009

This is a lovely romance, Fee. I hope you have something more tangible to hold on to at 3 AM than your haunting love. All that aching and breaking can't be good for your sanity. Yet, even those who have someone robed in flesh and blood to hold sometimes suffer loneliness and ache for something more. You do bring out the philosopher in your fans my friend.

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on June 2, 2009

but nature a ghost is cold, but this one breaks the mold ... fantastic song that simmers the senses ...

Reviewed by Michelle Mead

Reviewed on June 2, 2009

Wow, I love this- I really really love this-into the library it goes- REALLY love this.

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on June 2, 2009

"Oh sweet stuff I think my sanity is about to come apart"

That line says it all for you, for me, for us all...especially at 3am, ED & rufuz

Reviewed by Christine Alwin

Reviewed on June 2, 2009

A beautiful haunting romantic song...I can hear this in my head!
Hugs
Christine

Reviewed by J'nia Fowler

Reviewed on June 2, 2009

This would make a pretty cool song. No go back to sleep. lol, hugs, J'nia

Reviewed by neerja gandhi (Reader)

Reviewed on June 2, 2009

nice....warm and good wishes

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)

Reviewed on June 2, 2009

Oh my,would really love to hear you sing this one sweet Fee..very nice indeed..stay safe and well..Hugsss

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on June 2, 2009

Sing me that song a three PM if you do it at three AM I will pull the Canadian outa you! LOL

Georg

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone

Reviewed on June 2, 2009

Well, the Ghost of Three AM, brings the wrath of 6am! Sucks when you have to get up to go to work after such a lovely evening! lol
Love your creative juices at 3 am..keep um coming doll!

Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson

Reviewed on June 2, 2009

Well, Fee, maybe you weren't able top sleep, but look what a beautiful poem you wrote!

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on June 2, 2009

Keep lovin that ghost of Three A.M., and finish workin on this song!

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

Reviewed on June 2, 2009

would love to hear this tune!

Reviewed by Gwendolyn Thomas Gath

Reviewed on June 2, 2009

Enjoyed this tune guess the words would be haunting.
Great title Fee along with graphic
Wonderful that you are recording it all you never know what tune will strike up in your ears and or heart.

All the best and take care,
Gwendolyn

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on June 2, 2009

Arresting piccy and verse, Fee; even at three a.m., your muse is workin' overtime! (Kinda' like mine, hunh?? LOLOLOL) Great write; enjoyed! Well done, (((my friend))), well done! BRAVO!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D