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Love's Lost Ttime
by Felix LeRoy Perry → (All Poetry by Felix LeRoy Perry)
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love and time seem to always have a strange relationship that when in love is so often too hard to comprehend...a moment or a lifetime can be one and thee same...


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Love's Lost Time

By: Fee

I missed you the moment I met you

I cherished each moment we spent

Hours seemed to fly by like seconds

As we’d wonder where the time went

 

If time is a memory in the making

You gave me the best of what’s mine

For each day shared was a memory

Plucked from the bandits of time

 

Life ticks away in a constant circle

Yet love sees not the ticking old clock

An hour or two can feel like a heartbeat

When lover’s first hold hands for a walk

 

A few short days can seem like forever

When the one you love is not there

The ticking of the clock is a torture

That teardrops and loneliness share

 

I’ll leave my watch on the dresser

Take down the old clock off the wall

Tune out the news and the weather

I don’t need any reminders at all

 

For the absence of loving is lonely

And without you I’ve mislaid my time

Today will just drift into tomorrow

Until someday again you'll be mine…


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 Reviews of "Love's Lost Ttime"
Reviewed by M. Teresa Clayton
Reviewed on July 8, 2009
So captivating and real.

Reviewed by Bernice Angoh
Reviewed on July 6, 2009
Very heartfelt, makes me want to hug you....

Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on July 5, 2009
...I am wrapped in your words as truly time's measure has no meaning when it comes to missing someone..or spending time with a loved one..it can fly or stand still.... exquisite poem Fee, love this..and the photo is breathtaking
Hugs,
Christine

Reviewed by Myrna Badgerow
Reviewed on July 5, 2009
A very lovely poem Fee.. enjoyed the read..)

Myrna

Reviewed by Mary Coe
Reviewed on July 4, 2009
Romantic! Beautiful poem.

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on July 4, 2009
So very true, Fee. Sometimes I close my eyes and I think that I can actually feel time flowing past my face. This is made even more pronounced when missing someone one ought to be with. Thank you. Love and peace,

Regis

Reviewed by Sheila Roy
Reviewed on July 4, 2009
So true, Fee. Time does creep when the one you love is not beside you. Hugs,
Sheila

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on July 4, 2009
beautiful and soulful write-my heart aches for the saddness expressed so well

Reviewed on July 3, 2009
"For the absence of loving is lonely

And without you I’ve mislaid my time

Today will just drift into tomorrow

Until someday again you'll be mine…"

This is so beautiful even though the time is an endless wait...
"Love's Lost Time" ....where does it really go?
Love & Inspirations 2U Fee!
Vickie

Reviewed on July 3, 2009
So very lovely Fee. I'm particularly fond of the line, "Today will just drift into tomorrow"
Hugs,
Marcis

Reviewed by Jon Willey
Reviewed on July 3, 2009
Felix, you have captured love in the frame of time -- for it is love that is the measure of time -- a beautifully romantic poem my friend -- peace and love --Jon Michael

Reviewed by Elizabeth Russo
Reviewed on July 3, 2009
Your concluding stanza gripped me by the throat, Fee ... strange how different the moments feel without the one we love... you've really captured the emotions in this one! Hugs, Elizabeth

Reviewed by Ms Beeds
Reviewed on July 2, 2009
Absolutely stunning!

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on July 2, 2009
You do romance way too well for a guy, you sure you weren't maybe a woman in a prior existence...;-) ed

Reviewed by Michelle Mead
Reviewed on July 2, 2009
This first line brings tears to the eyes for its raw beauty, and the poem only gets better from there-it is good when we can see that the moments we share with someone are as magical as they are, so that later, if gone, they hang on in the heart, heartwrenching, but also unregrettable and unforgettable-the 4th stanza cuts the heart with truth-the 5th stanza, too, very relatable to anyone who has missed a love-and the final stanza, excellent-your best work, Felix.

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on July 2, 2009
Bitter sweet in your captivating way of weaving a romantic poem,

Reviewed by Lori Moore
Reviewed on July 2, 2009
The opening line captivates. The rest of the poem delivers. Well done.

Reviewed on July 2, 2009
Beautiful poem, Fee; well penned! Love the piccy!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D

Hope you had a wonderful Canada Day; I've seen some of the fireworks from that way here in Texas, courtesy of YouTube; saw some amazing displays! :)

Reviewed by Carole Mathys
Reviewed on July 2, 2009
A beautiful capture of the never ending dance between love and time...well done, Fee

Carole~


Reviewed by Rose Rideout
Reviewed on July 2, 2009
Felix this is so beautiful, so much love placed in each word. I felt the sadness from the absence of my loved one. Thank you for sharing.

Love ya face Cuz XOXOXO, Rose

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on July 2, 2009
You say very well it, "...memories plucked from the bandits of time..." probably one of the most memorable words to define love.

Georg


Reviewed on July 2, 2009
Magnificent work, Fee!

Reviewed by Jms Bell
Reviewed on July 2, 2009
YOUR RHYME SCHEME IS NICE...PRODUCED WITH THE PHRASES AND IMAGERY THAT SOLIDLY AND BEAUTIFULLY SUPPORT YOUR THEME. THANKS FOR SHARING AND BLESSINGS. JOYCE

Reviewed by Eileen Granfors
Reviewed on July 2, 2009
My favorite image: the bandits of time.

This is a terrific poem that captures love on the wings of time.
Eileen

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on July 2, 2009
A few short days can seem like forever,
When the one you love is not there

How so very true, my friend.


Reviewed by Jennifer Christian
Reviewed on July 2, 2009
What a sweet sentiment Fee. I enjoyed reading this.


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